Is this in the right place? I dunno but I'm making a book called The Flying Boy ( I hope Square Enix doesn't mind! ) and I'm gonna use Sora's name. I was wondering if I could get some ideas from u all? Here's the story so far: A girl called Lauren ( one of the main characters ) leaves with her evil dad who doesn't like Lauren to have fun ( obviously, the bad guy ) out to sea in their boat forever. While she's out at sea, Lauren has to eat fish every day ( whitch she's not to keen on ). One day, she decides to go up to the look-out, hearing a boy laugh in the distance. She falls off and finds herself above the clouds, flying with the flying boy ( the other main character ) who saved her. Sooooo. Do u like it so far? I'm also gonna add another bad guy to it called Hex witch is a man in balck coat that always has his hood up ( ring any bells? ). Give me some ideas so I can get it finished and published.
>_> This topic should probably go here in the Creativity Corner, since it's a fan-made story and doesn't actually have anything to do with KH.
Interesting. Hopefully, the book will have better spelling. Anyway. I don't see how the man is evil? I mean, eating fish every day? I have to question on how they drank water. Yeah. Anyway. My advice, get a basic plot down, then start working out the small details. That will make the story good. Good luck to you on your story writing.
U no, I never thought about the water thing.... I guess I got thrown off with the being surrounded by water all the time I guess I just assumed they'd drink out of the ocean but I guess it wouldn't taste very nice, being salt water and all lol. Oh, and the evil man thing, he doesn't let Lauren have fun so u can imagine his reaction when he finds out Lauren has made friends with a flying boy. That's great but.. uh.. hehe. I have no idea how to move this!
Thnx. I'm kinda new to the forums and I normally just use the first one I find. I put it in here cause The Flying Boy is Sora when he was 14 but his clothes and hair are silver and instead of a crown he has a tear drop hanging from his necklace. Maybe I should call him something else.....
