The Famous Last Words ~ Iraq war story

ive already finished the 2nd chapter ^^

 

The Famous Last Words

by:iChristian

"We have finally found the location of the actual terrorist leader," President Bush's voice rumbled through the microphone in Washington D.C. as his last speech was under way, but let's go back to where this all started.

** ..::flashback::.. **

"FRAG 'EM FRAG 'EM!!!" The leader of the 13th unit shouted as a man threw a frag-gernade over a half-broken wall.Blood was everywhere, that, blood, dust, and wounded screams.It was a horrific sight to see, if I had been there, i would be able to tell you more about this battle, but all I know is that they won, but it came with a price, every U.S. troop was killed, except for 13...



"why are we here?!more blood?!MORE DEATH?!" a man with the number "IX" on his army jacket shouted as he was drinking his beer.
"Shut up, Andrew," another man with a black army jacket said, he had "X" on his.
"WHY SHOULD I?!"Andrew replied
"because you're being too loud, I've had enough screaming and loud sounds, so shut up." the man said calmly.
Andrew shrugged, "Well, aren't you sick of all of this?we're next, it's obvious!"
"I know, but there's still no reason to shout." said The other man

suddenly, a door creaked open.
"well, if it isn't number XIII" The other man sneered.
he was right, this man had a black army jacket, just like him, but he had longer black hair, and deep red eyes.
"What of it? At least I'm not the one who's wining that his ears hurt, Kyle!" XIII laughed.
"Shut up, Aaron!" Kyle sneered as he threw a piece of paper to him
"what's this, a death wish?" Aaron laughed.
"Just read it, stupid."


..::.::note::.::..

XIII, I have a task for you, report to my office Immediately!

~General Hawk-eye~

..::.::end note::.::..

"Why can't she just tell me this stuff?" Said Aaron.
"She doesn't want to break a nail!" Kyle laughed.


Aaron walked across the camp when, suddenly, a snipe shot went right past him.
"damn!" Aaron exclaimed as he took out a pistol and looked cautiously around the camp.
"...THERE!" Aaron said as he shot the terrorist in 5 different spots, the Heart, the Lung, the Stomach, and the right arm.Aaron sighed as he heard clapping and footsteps coming towards him.

"Very nice aiming, XIII," A woman's voice came from behind.Aaron turned around on his heels, pistol in hand.
"General Hawk-Eye, right?"Aaron asked.
"correct, come to my office please."Hawk-eye said.
Aaron and Hawk-eye looked eye-to-eye.The General had a black jacket
with the number "I" on it.
"S-sure Aaron said as he followed her into her office

~end of chapter 1~

sorry if its short, guys!!this took three pages so...yeah!please comment!

 

Nice work little man, keep up the good work

 

That's a great story. It's good to see someone focusing on a real event and creating a plot around what might have happened. Please keep writing.

 

ive already finished the 2nd chapter ^^

 

That was great!