The Comedy Adventures of Org. XIII! (ch. 1)

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  1. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Ok, it's short, and it has the writing skill of a 5th grader. I wrote in in crunch time, for a little story competition at my school..I actually won 3rd place! Anyway, here it it, Chapter 1:

    Xemnas was sitting in his room, reading a book. About two minutes later, Axel, who drug Roxas along, came bounding through the door. "Hey," Axel began, then took a deep breath. In one long, winded yell, he screamed, "Hey, Mansex, look at this, we got asked to star in a T.V show!" Roxas sighed. Xemnas, looked at Roxas, who mouthed "I don't know..." Xemnas looked at Axel, and said, "Don't call me Mansex." then he quickly added, "We'll see about the T.V show." Axel let out something in the sort of a whimper, and left. Roxas looked after him, and left as well.

    Later on, when Xemnas got everyone together, the tried quieting them down. No use, there. Larxene giggled loudly at a joke that Demyx was telling. "I SAID QUIET, EVERYONE!" Xemnas yelled. the room fell silent. Xemnas cleared his throat, and began. "Ok, Axel brought it up that some T.V company has asked us to star in a sit com. Axel, would you please tell us what you know?" Axel ran up to Xemnas. 'Ok, so here's the deal. they need 6 of us to be main role stars, and at least 1 fill in." Axel said, airquoting fill in, and went to sit down. Xemnas scooted over to where Axel was standing. "Who wants to take part?" he asked. Axel shot his hand up. After a moment, Roxas, Larxene, and Demyx rose their hands. Xemnas narrowed his eyes a bit, then he smirked. "Are you sure you want to stay behind? Anyone who does has to make out with Marluxia." Marluxia rose to his feet, and started yelling. "What's the big idea?! Why me?" he held a dumbstruck expression.

    Larxene walked up to Xemnas and over heard what he has said to Vexen. 'What?! A joke?" she asked, quite stupidly. Xemnas looked at her oddly, "Yeah..." he said. "Why?" he said, smirking. Larxene burst out. "No! You got the wrong idea!" she said. then she lowered her voice. "But I do see him eyeing Namie a lot."

    Later on, while everyone was in their rooms, Namine was sneaking around. "I have to get out of here." she said, to herself. She glided past Roxas, who just came out of his room, but was too occupied to see her. But she just had to make her presence known. "It's way too easy to excape," she said. Roxas heard her and turned around. "Wha-?" she mumbled. Namine was up beside him now. She scooted in a bit closer. 'Hi, Roxas." she said, in a lovey-dovey tone. "Uh...hi..Namie.."Roxas stammered. hew was busy backing away slowly from Namine to say anything in a normal tone. "What's the matter, Roxas?" she asked He stammered even more. "Uh...no..thing....Hey..uh..someone's..co-" He stopped. then he whispered, "Namine?" She had disappeared. Axel walked around from the corner. "I heard voices." He said. He looked at Roxas oddly. Roxas just smiled innocently. "Voices..That was probably just the others in their rooms." he said. Axel saw right through it. Roxas never was a good liar, and they both knew it. "I heard two voices out here. Yours, and a female voice." he said, emphasizing the word female. Roxas frantically looked around, hoping that Larxene was close. He didn't see Larxene, but he was relieved nonetheless. Xigbar came looking for Axel to tell him something, and while they talked, Roxas made a getaway.

    Once Roxas reached his room, he slammed the door behind him. "That," he said, "was close." He turned around, only to discover Namine. "What was?" she asked, standing up. "N-nothing." he said. "But what are you doing?" he asked. She has disappeared.

    The next day, Xemans gathered up everyone that was going. Overall, there was Axel, Roxas, Larxene, Demyx, Vexen, and Marluxia, and Luxord. Xemnas turned to tell Xigbar something. "Xigbar, make sure that the remainder of the organization says under control. Xigbar didn't look at him. Xemnas stood for a minute. "I'll be back soon," he said, then lowered is voice to a whisper "Xiggy." Xigbar turned, but Xemnas was already gone.

    After walking for what seemed like hours, Larxene was moaning and complaining. "Where is this place?" "Are we there, yet?" "I'm tired of wal- mhmhmhmhphm!" Roxas and Axel both covered Larxene's mouth.

    When they arrived at the T.V studio, Xemnas elbowed Luxord, who elbowed Marluxia, which created a chain reaction of Marluxia elbowing Vexen, who nudged Demyx, who poked Larxene, who slapped Demyx, then elbowed Axel, who tapped on Roxas' shoulder. "So, this is it?" asked Larxene. Axel, Demyx and Roxas all simply said "Wow." Xemnas turned to leave. "Have fun", and everyone walked through the gate.



    Like I said, nothing special, and short...oh well..=D
     
  2. JellyBeing ALL. THE. BUTTS.

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    I liked it. :D
     
  3. Gravity Chaser

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    Heh, funny! Please continue this story, I really enjoy reading it.
     
  4. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Thanks..=D
    I'm writing Chapter 2 right now...^_^​