I stand alone in a field of flowers, gently twirling a rose in my fingers, softly letting my eyes look no where, for what be seemed as hours. I gently lift my eyes, a tear or two caressing itself down my cheek, it doesn't take long for my head to fall again, I feel so weak. It used to be so strong, so unbreakable, yet now with everything changing around us, unfornately it looks like it is becoming capable. We had been so close, we had shared everything with each other, holding a special place in each other's hearts, but now I'm feeling pain, a painful dose. I used to take care of you, I was always by your side, hugging you close and wiping your tears, through your life I tried to be your guide. We used to laugh and smile together, knowing how special it was what we had, always being there for each other, no matter what the weather. But it seems those times are slowly fading, lost with memories of the past, I hold the rose tightly, hoping and wishing that we could always last.
Simply amazing. =') I can kind of relate to that poem with what's going on my life now. You're words hit me where most poems can't reach. Job well done.
That's really beatiful Last... you can feel the emotions very strongly. i hope you feel better soon. 'lovely poem.
*sighs* Last, I really hate seeing you this way... *hugs* I really hope you can feel better soon... It's a really emotional poem... It's like I can see and feel exactly what this poem is saying... Wonderful job, Last... And just a few words for you and R_G: Though you might think you may never see them again, like their forgetting about you, just remember it's not true... And you may be with them again some day... :)
