The Black Angels

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  1. Sorikai Traverse Town Homebody

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    Just a new story I made (sry, no Kh... unless u count Aero, who LOOKS like Sora). This one is my fav that I eva made, that for sure. Sry, but I won't b letting ppl sign up to this one right now, but I MIGHT in the future. I'll post chap 1 in a few mins. For now, here's the Prologue, where u'll meet the Angels (if ya read it 'o 'course lol)

    Ok, so here’s the deal, before I continue any further: I’m not supposed to be telling anyone any of this, to be honest, so please, for my sake and yours, keep this quiet.

    Right, now that’s clear, time to meet The Black Angels, I guess. There’s six of us:

    Me (Max), I’m fourteen and live in a house that looks like a castle with the other Angels. What can I say about me? I can be a little impatient sometimes, I care about the other Angels a lot (in other words, hurt them, and you’ll have to deal with me), and sometimes I tend to forget about homework a lot, so Aero has to constantly remind me about it.

    Aero, my best friend and paired partner from The Black Angels (don’t know what that means yet? Don’t worry, you’ll catch on quick, I’m sure), he’s fourteen too. Hmm… How to describe Aero? Well, he’s one of the more responsible Angels, he’s really nice to everyone, loves to go flying in the mornings (what, weren’t expecting us to be able to fly? Why did you think we were called The Black Angels?), and, a special mention for all Kingdom Hearts fans out there, he looks a lot like Sora, only he has silver spiky hair and silver eyes.

    Krystal, our night light (no, I mean literally. You’ll see), she’s fourteen too. Krystal is one of the trouble makers out of all of us, but that doesn’t necessarily mean she’s mean, on the contrary she’s the exact opposite. She likes everyone except, of course, those who harm us. Oh, and go near her paired partner, Rudolph, and look out.

    Rudolph is the youngest and, wait for it, a Vampire not a reindeer with a glowing red nose (people tend to pick on him because of his name). He’s nine, so as most nine-year old boys are, he’s always getting in trouble at school, and at home. Along with his paired partner, Krystal, we get a handful of trouble everyday.

    Oz is one of the oldest Angels n the group, but that does not mean he’s the leader, got that? (‘cause I’m the leader! Got it memorized?) He’s sixteen and Marina’s paired partner. He doesn’t talk all that much and is an absolute nightmare to get up mornings, and when he gets one of the others up, he makes us jump a mile because he looks more like a vampire than Rudolph does even, if that’s possible. But no, he’s not a vampire, but he is a Werewolf though, which makes him kind of hard to deal with on a full moon, as you may imagine.

    Marina is the oldest and Oz’s paired partner. She’s seventeen, but that doesn’t make her any better at behaving than Rudolph and Krystal! Which can sometimes get on my nerves, because I think that the eldest out of us should be a better role model for the younger ones. Apart from that, she’s so good at making us all laugh when we’re down, that her childish behavior doesn’t really bother any of us that much. Right so, special thing about Marina apart from her wings, of course would be she can heal anyone except herself, which can be helpful sometimes. Oh, and she can see in the dark.

    Right, so that’s us. The Black Angels. Just in case you hadn’t cottoned on yet, we have wings. Black, dark, spooky ones to be precise, but that’s not exactly why we’re called The Black Angels (besides, Krystal’s wings are actually a pure white color). We’re called that because we are angels, in a way, but we all like dark stuff (even Krystal, despite the fact that she glows white), you know, Satan heavy metal rock (Iron Maiden for eva!!!!), we write spooky songs most of the times, we love scaring the heck out of people, we love spooky stories about Werewolfs and Vampires (Oz and Rudolph’s choice as you may have guessed) … That kind of stuff. Not too bad, because of Rudolph, but just dark enough.

    Well, I guess that’s enough about us now, because if I say anymore, I’ll spoil the story (which I am very good at, may I just say). So, see you on the other side! Oh gees, you’re saying I just dreamt an entire intro? Oh brother, I have got to lay off the Maximum Ride books for a while…


    So, there ya go. That's the black angels, now I guess I should get some of the chaps I've finished up here!!! but first, I wanna no wot u think. In other words: more responce, more chaps. I no that sounds selfish of me, but I think it sounds fair. U like, I give. I g2g now, so I MIGHT post chap 1 2morrow. Adios amigos!!! *falls asleep at computer desk*