http://danny865.deviantart.com/art/The-Beach-117974200 Yes, I know, mature filter is on. But please, don't take it the wrong way. It isn't even MEANT to be perverted in any kind. I think it is art.
It's not perverted at all. It is art. Anyway, on to critique. So, I'me looking at it at it and wondering... what is going on with the woman's face? Is she at profile or looking toward us or and 3/4s? I have no idea because there are no main facial features and leaves me totally confused. It's befine if it was na abstract sort of drawing, but judging from the rest of it, it doesn't seem that way. On a different note, anatomy seems pretty fair. A few exceptions are her left arm and her neck. Especially the neck. Honestly, it looks a bit broken, and more like that position should be in something more macabre than nude art.
She's looking at us in 3/4's, indeed. I agree with the neck, that is the main part I kinda screwed up, but I don't think it looks that bad. I had to focus on the hair too much, so I forgot to work on the neck, but it still turned out fine I think. Anyway, thanks for viewing :)
