Test my writing skills

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  1. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Okay I was thinking how many people really like my poem light of love, that someone asked me to write, so I was thinking, can I do it again, just give me an emotion and I'll see if I can write about it...okay then lets go
     
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    The feeling you get when you are really hungry and want to bite a tree because there is no food.
    Does that count?
     
  3. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    I think a poem about happiness would be great.
     
  4. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    No sorry I said emotion not feeling, I mean like love hate happy sad, things like that

    okay then sis i'll get right on it
     
  5. Ratchet Bah weep graaagnah wheep ni ni bong!

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    Ok, how about 'sad'. It's something everyone relates to at some point.
     
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    That is an emotion.
    It's sadness, hate, anger, love, and hunger.
     
  7. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Okay let me write one for happy first

    No it's not becuase you can contorll hunger, emotions you can't
     
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  9. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    Okay then just give me a little time, so I can posted the one I've just written, then write one for betrayal and post that one too
     
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    African delicacies.
     
  11. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    ...Is that an emotion Roxas?
     
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    What about your angryness inside of you?
     
  13. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    hmm I could link that with the poem Aeon Sora asked for, talk about killing two birds with one stone
     
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    IS IT?!?!

    IIISSS ITTTT?!?!

    No.
     
  15. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    how about...*thinx*emotianal pain?(ive gone through alot of it emotionally and physically i would like to here a poem about that plz)
     
  16. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    You mean like having more then one emotion at the same time, I would say that is emotionla pain, being confued with what you're feeling
     
  17. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    i meant hurting inside (some practiclly shot u inside ive been emotianally shot in the heart EMOTIANALLY!!!)
     
  18. AlexleHoshi Dude called Alex

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    I'm sure I can come up with something for that
     
  19. ...::/final_falling\::... King's Apprentice

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    cool,thanx!
     
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    What about a poem of the happiness or sadness friends give you. That sounds interesting to me. ^_^
     
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