I dunno if it makes sense to you, but so far, this has gotten good comments. I was playing Fire Emblem too much last weekend......
lol! Yeah! You did what I suggested. XDD Weeeeell... my comments again, this is so funny! I liked how you drew the character's expression, it really brings the comedy in the comic. XD Nice job.
It's good. I can't complain to you about the colors since I'm not really good at coloring myself. Practice on drawing the characters, working on that might get you improved. The neck is suppose to be somewhat hidden if you are trying to draw chibi, not exactly having a no neck, but just hidden. Use a ruler a for drawing the lines. That is all. ._.
YAY! Someone likes my style! I feel special And now you understand how I live up to my name. :) Lemme find some... Or censor some... XD My drawing style is an intentional thing.... Whether or not there is a neck depends on the room left over after the speech bubbles. Also, my ruler is dusty from lack of use. All of my comic's borders are freehand. The whole notebook paper thing is out of slight laziness, and affordability. Some of y'all seen this one, buuut.... Most haven't :) This is Halo's Cr33d part 1