Digital Art Tag For Tofuman

Yeah...CnC i gots school tomorrow

 

Not bad, but the big red ball inside the big red cluster draws attention away for the focal.

 

i followed a tut with this, it called for a fratual, so thats what i put, but i can take it off

 

Take it out and if it looks better keep it that way, but if not then leave it as it is.

 

You should move it over, not take it out IMO.
Also, you should think about bluring suff on the very right and left sides, and blur slightly for depth in places.
Experiment; a little re coloring could make this a little better, like a bw gradient map or something a little more complex..