Traditional Art Syaoran Sketch

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Haseo, Sep 27, 2008.

  1. Haseo Knight of Light

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  2. Jiku Neon Kingdom Keeper

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    The head is too wide. From the right jaw to the ear it is too stretched out and awkward looking. I also think the eyes are too big for the head. In general it'd be pretty much fixed if you simply made the head less flat and shrank the eyes down a mite bit.
     
  3. Haseo Knight of Light

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    Thanks, I'll try that.
     
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    Already commented on it. The yes could tune up a bit and then the head is wide just like Trogdor said and the neck could be a bit thicker.