This is story I made at random. To let you know, I'm not a good speller. If you can help me spell some words if I misspell any. Thanks and enjoy the story. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I look like a normal teenage girl who has a lot of secrets. Well, your right and wrong. I'm not a normal teenager. I do hide secrets which I will reveal to you in time. It all started when my older sister disappered before my eyes. I was only 6 years old. I remember the last words my sister said, "I must find what the Sword of Elements are. I won't return until I find who is the eighth element." What did she mean 'eighth elment?' I thought there were only 7 elements. I woke up from the dream. "Not that dream again. What is the sword of element?" My name is Luna. Well, that is my nickname, my full name is Luraina Aura Black. My friends always made fun of my last name. I blame them. I looked out the open window. It was raining. My teacher Ms. Selby closed the window. "I don't want you to get wet, Luna." "Thank you." I said as she smiled and continued the class. School got out and I walked into the open rain. "Luna wait!" I looked back to see who called me. It was Sarah. "Don't go just yet. We still need to make plans for the dance next week." "Sorry I can't. I have to get home or my brother-in-law will get pissed." "See you tomrrow." I walked out into the endless rain. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Hope you like.
Hm.... kind of short for a beginning... maybe be a little more descriptive in the next chapter? :) Sounds like a good start for a great story. I can't wait to read more! (By the way, one part of the opening for you book reminded me of a part from an anime called Spiral.... *shrugs shoulders*)
yea i just got an idea from it and next thing i knew i made a story. but it is way different. it will get more inersting later. I don't have time.
