Traditional Art Sword Fight

Second in a series of ten or so pictures ending in the skinny guy's death. I may post up some of the others once I sketch them out, but the first one is just plain god awful so I won't even ask for opinions.



You all know I suck, right? Criticize as you like.

 

Holy! Awesome job! I was shocked how you drew them!

Overall, the best yet I had ever seen!

 

All i can say is that you're "somewhat" good.

I know how hard it is to make a guy/girl move.

Trust me, i've made a lot of ugly moving guys/girls.

The guy in the left seems like he has a short neck.

And the right arm is too stretched out.

The guy in the right seems good.

 

Not bad. Try going over it in pen or marker to add a bold effect.

 

Ooooo... that looks pretty cool! The guy facing forward kind of reminds me of Squall a little bit.... Nice job on it! :D

 

Much appreciated, now what's wrong with it.

Duly noted, I noticed the arm thing but I figured it was irrelevant by that point. lol My androgynous characters do get the mistaken for a girl thing after all.

Inking. Ew... I'll give it a try one day.

Well, I guess so. I was actually thinking of someone else though.

 

it looks like concept art for a main character

 

It is, sort of.

 

I wanna crop the one on the right, and put it in my sigg...can I? O.O

 

I guess it's fine, but it's not exactly a high quality pic, there are better things. Just be aware that as I said to exile0025, these are actually concepts for something I'm contemplating working on.

 

I say that the man on the left? Jumping, should be shown more air movements, or faded out blade movement.

 

omg ur awesome better than me

 

The epicness is overwhelming O_O