Super Smash Bros. Brawl: Alternative Story [PG-13 for Language and Violence]

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Xaale, Jun 7, 2008.

  1. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Okay, I've been playing Brawl a lot and finally finished the Subspace Emissionary. I thought the storyline...lagged. So here's an alternative storyline~ enjoy!

    Chapter 1: Corrupted

    Fox McCloud piloted his arwing with amazing grace, easily dodging the firing Star Wolf ship. He swooped down and spirled faster and faster, the earth below his growing larger and larger. The fox smirked and pulled up on the controls, bringing his vehicle into a sharp curve upward.

    Wolf O'Donnel growled as Fox's ship came straight at him. He turned sharply to the left, but he was too late. The wing of his arwing collided with the quarry's and a small flame appeared from the impact.

    "Damn." The Star Wolf captain's eyes caught sight of the flashing of red lights on the dashboard. His face turned into a snarl as he saw yet another Star Fox arwing come into view.

    Fox McCloud tuned into his communication control and said smoothly, "What took so long, Falco?" The falcon laughed into the speaker. "Well, there were some other Star Wolf Ships that someone wouldn't aid me with."

    "Hey, I'm sorry!" Fox's eyes grew wide and he said in an overconfident tone, "Well, Wolf is no easy matter. It seems though that he wasn't expecting me to be so alert this time...as opposed to last time."

    Suddenly, a shaking blow hit the back of the Star Fox leader's ship. Falco paniced when he saw his commander's ship go down. Not only did Fox's ship go down, but the large ship piloted by Wolf began to fall, too.

    "What the hell?" Fox's voice shook and broke on the communication. Falco grabbed the communication device and shouted, "Are you okay? What's going on!?!"

    Fox's voice was only a scattered array of beeps and hisses. The communication had broken! "To hell with this!" Falco meant to mumble but instead it came out as a yell. He was unsure of what to do, so he decided to go to the planet after the two falling ships.

    All of a sudden, a blast of energy came from the right of Falco. He yelped and yanked on the controls, but the dizzying lights filling the cockpit told him it was too late. The ship caught fire as it spun down after the other two ships in a mad rush for survival.
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    This chapter has a lot more to it. I have to go to bed, though...

    I'll add on to it tomorrow.