Sunrise

This is a Short Story with Namine as the Main Charactor, and Kairi and Sora playing supporting roles.

This takes place after KH2.

CnC!


Sunrise
Namine wishfully looked out at the pale waters away from Destiny Island. Her bright eyes looked longingly at the blank paper at her side and the multiple hues of color pencils. She made herself tear her eyes away. She couldn’t draw. She had messed up so bad last time… and she was the only one who knew it. Sora, Kairi…they had all forgotton.

She couldn’t take it anymore. The blank canvas stared her down, daring her to change its configuration. She put her hands under chin and fidgeted uncomfortably. Her long blonde hair flew in the light breeze, and blended in nicely with her ivory dress. It was a little ratty and old, but Namine didn’t care. It was the only attire that she could wear and feel like she was truly her.

Namine bit her small lip. Her eyes flickered back and forth from her hands, to the open shinning sea, to her blank, unopened world of her sketchbook. She tapped her long fingernails on her pale leg and shut her eyes. Your not allowed too… she thought to herself. You made a promise to yourself that you would never do it again…

Her palms were sweating, itching to sketch. Namine let out a little screech. She was so lucky no one was awake this early in the morning. The sun was just coming up over the glowing water. The sun reflected off of the water and on to the sand that Namine was sitting on. She made little circles in the sand with her foot. “I CANT TAKE THIS ANYMORE!!!” She screamed. Her ears heard the shifting of movement over near Kairi’s and Sora’s house. She clasped her petite hand to her small mouth, grabbed her sketchbook and color pencils and ran to the island with the large palm trees. Her blonde hair streaming in the wind, with her bare feet kicking up sand behind her. If they came out when she was out here, she would be so dead…

She tiptoed across the planks of wood on the bridge to the island. She hoisted herself up onto the largest palm tree, her blank paper and pencils still in her hand. The rising sunrise painted an aura of colors onto the paper. The picture was there...she just had to make it into a hard copy. A sly smile crept upon her face. Then she took a charcoal piece and started to draw.

Soon she had her picture done. She delicately ripped it out of her sketchbook and put it on her little legs, admiring her handy work. She turned so that she was looking at the beach instead of the water. She crossed her legs into a pretzel and waited. She brushed her blonde hair out of her face and stared intensely at the sand. Any minute now… She thought to herself. She diverted her gaze over to Kairi’s house. The door silently creaked open. Kairi’s eyes blinked and squinted adjusting to the rising sun. She was wearing her itty-bitty magenta shorts, with small baby pink hearts adorning it. Her white tank top waved lightly in the breeze as she stepped down to the grainy sand. Namine giggled happily. “Ooooh, am I good!” She silently chuckled to herself.

And now… She looked over at Sora’s house. He was already standing on his porch, his head tilted cutely to the side. His eyes were hazy and misty. His brown hair seemed even more spiky then usual, considering he still had his bed head. She looked at him more closely and fell off the palm tree and into the warm sand laughing, her skinny legs and petite ankles sticking straight up in the air. She clutched her hand to her chest and took a few deep breaths. O that is rich… She laughed to herself. She picked herself up off the sand and shook her golden hair to get all of the sand out. She hopped back up onto the palm tree and carefully set her drawing next to her on the palm tree. Sora was wearing these goofy pair of white boxers with little crowns and keyblades on them. The silver part of the keyblade and crown almost reflected in the sun.Sora and Kairi walked over to each other so that they were standing facing each other on the middle of the beach. The petite blonde carefully spied on them through the leaves of the trees, making sure that she was camouflaged in.

Sora said something Namine couldn’t hear to Kairi, and she giggled and blushed, her short brown hair swaying while she laughed. Sora’s lips started to move, and she suddenly stopped laughing. Kairi cocked her head to the side, her bright eyes showed confusion as she stared at Sora. Sora lifted his hands up and cupped her chin in his palm and leaned into kiss her. Their lips made contact, and Kairi’s eyes opened wide in surprise. After a few seconds, her whole body relaxed and her eyes gently shut. The sun shown a rainbow of color onto the two teenagers, basking them in a warm glow.

Namine put her fingers to her lips, her eyes sparking like the sun on the water. She picked up her drawing and held it up to that it was next to the couple. A large smile spread across her cute face. Everything down to the colors…was perfect.

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Lol, Namine got them good....

The picture was of Sora and Kairi kissing on the beach in those outfits btw if you didnt already figure it out.

Please Comment on what you think of it, and how I can Improve! =D

Here is the link to my other story!
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=10259

 

pretty good.
i liked when sora and kairi kissed XD

 

Thanks!

That was a fun part to write.

 

Yeah, it was good for a short story.


Very cute.


You could have explained why Namine couldn't draw at the beginning though.

I thought it was called "tank top" too...
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(begins rocking back and forth, excited) Okay, you've got me on the edge of my seat. What happens next ?!

 

Ehhh, because she draws when she modifies sora memories, and she doesnt want what happened in COM to happen again.

And I dont know much about fashion, so i dont know how to spell tank top. >.<

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Do you want me to make another story as a sequel to this one?? O.o

 

I liked it a lot Rosey! ^^

Great plot, details, everything!
You, my friend, are good. =D

 

Let me put it to you this way: You've created a short that's already recieved as much replies as it has views. You must be doing something right, and I think it would be a mistake to stop now! I have a story of my own, and I just have views, but one or two replies from another person. I think you should keep going! ^_^

 

Awww, thanks, that means alot coming from you! ^^

*huggles to death*

 

very good :D
a sequal sounds interesting ^.^

 

:/

True...

*has to actually think what happens next*

OMG ITS ANOTHER PERSON POSTING!!!

*faints*

And you people arent even people who normally posts on my stories either... O wow.

And thank you all for your comments!

 

Here's where I unintentionally sound mean: I didn't know you had other stories, or that you wrote this well. Keep in mind this coming from a guy who doesn't get out often enough. But, now that I know, I'm going to try and take a look at some of your other stories!

 

I actually only have one other story, and i post poems on here occastionally.

And thanks that means alot to me. ^^

 

Holy! Man, I had no idea you were that good. I have to tell you: I don't like Aura. At all. I have a rep at school for rambling a lot, but at the moment I can think of twenty ways and reasons for her to get shot at with a bazooka!

You're going to have to tell me what I'm doing wrong with my story!

 

Thank you so much. Lol! YAY FOR BAZOOKAS!!!

Well, if you PM me your stories, i can look over them for you!

 

Very Well. Here's to bazooka's and PM's! (raises mouse in response) AAAH! WHAT'S THE MOUSE DOING HERE?! WHERE'S MY CAT?!

 

Lol. Nice.

:/

I need to think what i can put for this story...

 

Not sure why, but I'm a little hyper right now. Hope that goes okay.

 

*Laughs so hard at Kairi and Sora's sleep wear I fall out of my seat.*
*My Dad: "Shut the Hell up!!! Its 11 o' clock at night!!!"*
*I get back in my chair, and finish up the story.*

Omg, that was awesome. I'm envious. Wish I could say I had a short story that good in my desk drawer (where I keep hard copies of everything I type up). Loved Sora's boxer shorts. I want a pair that look like that. I'm gonna go somewhere and get them custom made. Naminé rulez. Keep up the good work, you have anothuh fan.

 

Cute one-shot, Rosey. =D Now then...

You could take out the "at."
I'm thinking "forgot" needs to be forgotten.
"Her".. I'm pretty sure you meant to put here.
"Tang," it's tank top, sweetie.

Good job anywhoz~ :3