Strength

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Darkcloud, Nov 17, 2008.

  1. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    You've moved on,
    Leaving me behind
    I wanted to go with you,
    For us to be together,
    That was the plan, but
    You've told me your feelings,
    Aren't the same as mine,

    Time's passed,
    People've come,
    You've gone,
    I'm here, and nothing,
    Wants to cooperate with,
    The intentions of others.
    What does that mean?

    You've moved on,
    You've met someone,
    It's only a matter of time,
    Before the two become one,
    In grace, marriage, honor, and courage.
    Things are going as planned for you,
    and you're happy.

    I'm moving on,
    Or at least, I'm trying to.
    Unavoidably, you've hurt me,
    I've hurt me, and this will probably stay.
    I'm trying to change, to heal,
    so maybe I can have, in myself,
    Life, Spirit, Determination,
    And Hope.
     
  2. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    Wow that was very good. I can tell you put a lot of work into it. Kudos!
     
  3. ♦Demon♥Angel♦ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I love it!!!
     
  4. Sonic the Hedgehog The Blue dude is back!!

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    That was a great poem bro.I know you put time into that I know you did.Props
     
  5. P E A N U T ~*~Never Surrender~*~

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    Very nice =). I can definitly understand what emotions are being described in the poem. It was very well written and kept my attention all the way through. Good job.