story prolouge

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should i continue "the three angels"

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  1. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    this is a prolouge for a story that i have written. it's short, but has chapeters. the title is called the three angels.

    the young teenager woke up on a day that would change his life. he got dressed and got ready. today was the boy's 15th birthday. he turned off the television that he had kept on all night and exited his room.

    "today is the day", Said a girl. three angels decended from the sky. one of them wore a dress, another wore a t-shirt and some jeans, and the last one work a white dress.

    "he can finally see us!", Said the one in blue.

    "hold-up, we got to be careful.", Said the angel in the t-shirt, "we could scare him a little too much."

    "i know.", the blue girl said, "but i'm just so happy!"

    "you know he could've seen us by know.", Said the white angel.

    they saw the boy eating his breakfast, still hiding from him. they went back to his room when he finished. they waited patiantly for him to enter his room. they knew he'd come back, because he forgot his backpack. they saw the door knob start to turn.

    "Get ready!", Said the one in jeans.

    tell me if you like it so i know to continue the story or not.
     
  2. Rosey Chaser

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    *sigh*

    1. No Polls
    2. Dont post the prolouge until you have the first chapter.

    Read the new rules <_>
     
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