story of a nobody

this is a story i wrote just out of boredness, i dont know if its that good but,... here it goes,
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story of a nobody

A Nobody is a husk that is left behind when the owners heart slips away from their body, a being with no emotions, no hearts, they couldn’t feel anything, just, pretending to just to survive. Or at least that’s what I always thought, until I actually became the thing I hated most…

Lightness to dark, darkness to light, my eyes struggled to stay open. My body searing with pain, as blood escaped my open wounds, a hole where my heart was escaping. My breath came out in slow, short rasps and the pain was unbearable. Was this the end? I thought of my life before, all my mistakes and all my dreams, my friends, I am sorry, I was not able to help, this is what I thought for the short time I was being tormented, but god, it felt like a thousand years had gone by and nothing had changed; my dream to finally become the queen of the Destiny Kingdom would not become a reality, the mistake of killing all those heartless without first figuring out how to save the hearts, never going to be forgiven. I could hear a boy’s sad voice calling out to me, what was he saying? I could barely make out the blurred figure of a 16 year old boy leaning over me, his silver hair brushing my cold skin. “Ri-” I tried to say but it just came out in a muffle, I felt warm tears falling onto my face, his ice-blue eyes staring into my empty hazel eyes. Suddenly, all had gone dark, darkness spreading even farther then the eye could see, I felt my body falling into the nothingness; I eventually came to the part where I forgot my name, my loved ones, where I had come from, my body became numb after the time I had been falling, falling… into darkness. I could feel my heart tearing away from me, and all that I knew, just disappeared. Now, I had become the nothingness I had been falling into, ‘I hope we meet again, my friends’ was the only full sentence I could spit out, I closed my eyes and left all of existence to fade away,……

I sat up fast, a small scream coming from my mouth, “at least it was just a dream,” I told myself realizing that the pain, the darkness, everything hadn’t happened, “but who was that girl? It wasn’t really me; I couldn’t recognize the voice or thoughts at all…” I said and opened the windows to the small room that I was in, the nice warm breeze brushing against my skin,"hey! Ailbyxe!" I looked down to see a girl and two boys waiting for me to come down, “I’ll be down in a minute!” I shouted and quickly put on blue jean capris, a black tank-top with blood-red designing looking like scratches and splatters all over, and pink writing on the chest saying ‘Bring Me To Life’, pink flip-flops, and a silver chain necklace that had a black heart on the end, brushed my blonde hair with pink and black streaks, and bolted downstairs and out the door,

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please comment

 

ur story is great

 

Nice story , and yet so true. * Begins crying * On a scale of one to ten , I give it a nine.

 

thanks guys, something that ive noticed about me is that when im bored, i start to think more xD ill have the next chapter up in a little, i want to see if anyone else wants to post,... thanks again
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Chapter 2

“Sheesh, when you said a minute you weren’t kidding!” a boy with blonde hair laughed, I gave a nervous laugh while scratching the back of my head, “I guess I was in a little bit of a hurry,” I laughed, and looked at the blonde haired boy with a black shirt with white designing, army-green vest, army-print capris, and a gold ‘X’ pendant, “So how long have you guys been waiting for me?” I asked and looked at a girl with brunet hair just past her shoulders laying on top of an orange tank top with white hibiscus imprints, tan capris, a white pearl bracelet, and a small circle pendant, “not that long, we got here when you started screaming though, we were about to come up when you opened the window, were you having a nightmare?” she asked with a confused look on her face, I looked at the brunet, “I guess, it was really weird Olette, I felt like I was dieing or something, well, I’m not going to get into detail, it was to complicated,” I said, the blonde headed boy got a concerned look on his face, “if it freaked you out that much then why don’t you tell us?” he asked, “I guess I could Hayner, but not here, you know Seifer and the gang would probably use it against me,” I said, Hayner and Olette nodded, I looked at another boy with a black and white sweat-band around his dark brown hair, a white shirt under a red jersey with black markings on it that resembled a dog and read ‘dogstreet’, and blue-jeans, “you know Pence, you have been quiet this whole time, something bothering you?” I asked, Pence shook his head, “no, just listening,” he said

All of us walked to the usual spot where we hang out all the time, I took my spot on the boxes that were stacked up next to a beat up brown couch that Olette sat on, as Hayner took his place on the pipes sticking out of the bottom of the wall, and Pence sat on some old luggage bags stacked up on the opposite side of the couch as me, “so what happened in the dream Ailbyxe?” Hayner asked, I looked at him, “well, it was weird; at first, it felt as if I was dieing, and the pain was so intense, and so real,” I began, now staring at the floor, Olette looked at me, “and then everything went away, the pain, the light, I was just, falling into nothing but black emptiness, I started to forget my name, where I came from, who my friends and family were, or at least, she forgot” I said, Hayner and Pence stared at me, Olette got a confused look on her face, “you mean, it wasn’t you going through this? Were you watching it happen?” I shook my head, ‘man, this is so weird to explain’ I thought, “its like, I was her, but it wasn’t me or my memories… its hard to explain,” I said and looked up at Hayner, he looked back at me, “well, maybe it was just a dream, I’m sure that you’ll forget all about it tomorrow,” she said, I looked back at her, “I hope you’re right,” I said,

After a long day we all finally said our goodbyes and left for home, I got back home and put on a tight white tank-top and black baggy pant, and hoped into bed, looking at the stars in the sky, “I wonder who she is…” I asked myself and drifted into sleep,
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I liked it, awesome job BB-chan <3

 

thanks momo-chan xP

 

>.>

<.<

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This is very nice. I really like the first chapter and the emotions you put into it.

 

I like, and expect more. Great job.

 

thanks! i thought my thread would die if no one else posted ^^' well, i already typed up the next chapter, so i think ill post it right now,

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Chapter 3

“No! Please stop!†I giggled loudly as a boy with silver hair, deep ice-blue eyes, a black shirt with a white and yellow vest, what looked like bandages on his left arm, and baggy blue jeans and another boy with brunet hair, black body suit with numerous belts and pockets and zippers, a black vest with silver shoulder armor, and sky-blue eyes tickled me almost half to death, I finally pushed them off me and got up and ran past a girl with a white dress, pink over dress, blue eyes, reddish-brown hair, and a small tear-drop pendant, “you guys need any help?†she laughed, I turned around and stuck out my tongue, “that’s not funny Kairi!†I shouted and started running again when the two boys nodded and got up and ran after me, Kairi close behind them. I bolted through a shack and up the stairs, hoping that they would slow the three down, I burst out the other side and across the bridge and to an islet, I heard the door open and three sets of slowing footsteps, I jumped up on a tree with star-shaped fruit growing in between leaves and sat down, “ok, ok, you win Ba-“ the image blurred quickly and returned to normal, I turned around to face the others, “hahaha! I knew that would slow down Sora but I didn’t think you would tire out too Riku!†I laughed at the sight of all of them trying to catch their breath, “well, maybe it didn’t slow me down!†the silver haired boy said and ran after me, I gave out a playful scream and jumped off the tree and skidded to the edge of the islet, the silver haired boy gasped as he saw me falling off the edge and ran over to try and catch me, I quickly smirked and pulled him in the water with me, “gotcha Riku!†I laughed as I looked at the boy that had landed on top of me in the water, I quickly blushed seeing how close he was, I could see a hint of him blushing before he got off me and helped me out, “would you just admit it already?!†Sora shouted over the edge, Kairi giggled as she looked at us, “Admit what?†Riku asked,

I slowly opened my eyes and sat up, “hm, another dream about her, and who were those three, admit what?†I asked myself and got dressed and headed outside, seeing Hayner and the others waiting for me, “you know, its hard to believe that its already vacation again,†Pence said, I laughed, “yeah, but I wish it was summer vacation again, instead of spring,†I said, Hayner nodded, “yeah, but, at least it’s closer then when we first got into the year,†he said, I looked down, “do… you guys know anybody named, Sora, Riku or Kairi?...†I asked, they all looked at me, “y-yeah, why do you ask?†Hayner asked, “Yeah, do you know them?†Olette asked, I shook my head, “n-no… they were in m-my dream last night…†I said, they all kept staring at me, I looked up at them and they all walked behind me and pushed me to the usual spot,

I sat down on the boxes, Hayner stood in front of me, Pence stood behind Hayner and Olette sat down next to me. I looked at Hayner, “it was her again, I dreamed I was playing around with all them,†Hayner crossed his arms, “did they mention a name at all?†he asked, Olette stood up and walked over to a table with a notebook and pencil and flipped it to a page, Pence looked down, “um, I’m going to go get some ice-cream…†he said and walked out, I looked up at Hayner, noticing that he was the only one near me, I blushed a little, and apparently he noticed me, because he blushed a little too, I shook my head, “no, when they were about to mention the name the dream blurred and I couldn’t catch it,†I said, Hayner sighed and scratched the back of his head, I had always liked Hayner, and Olette and Pence said that he liked me too; when I first came here, he was really nice to me, Olette said that normally when a newcomer came, he didn’t take to lightly to them. I guess I just have that charm on people.
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I liked that one, especially the memory.

 

im really sorry its taken me so long ;P but ive been writing for a while now and almost have two whole new chapters! but heres this one for now

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Chapter 4

Hayner sighed, “Maybe you should just ignore the dreams! Get on with your life!†he said, he had that signature pouty look on his face while crossing his arms, and I stared at his face and began to laugh. I had always thought it was funny to see him like that; eventually he started to laugh too. “Oh! Where did Pence go?! When ever he goes to get the ice cream he always disappears.†Olette said, I sighed and smiled at both of them, “take a guess,†I said and all of laughed and ran to clock tower and, of coarse, found him up there. “Hey guys! Sorry that I didn’t come back with the ice cream…†he said, rubbing the back of his head nervously.

Everyone else but me sat on the edge next to Pence, I stared at the sunset and remembered something, “hey, Hayner… remember what the day after tomorrow was?†I asked, a slight smile on my face. Hayner looked at me, “um… Give me a hint?†he said, blushing of embarrassment from forgetting. I stuck my tongue out in a playful manner, “it’s the struggle battle, don’t tell me you forgot already.â€

After we all hung out for a while the others started to head home while I just sat at the edge, looking at the setting sun. “You gonna leave soon Ailbyxe?†Hayner asked. I just looked at the sun, when I heard his footsteps leave I looked back to see him leave around the corner. At that time I felt something I didn’t really feel that often, a sad kind of feeling, even though I never felt this during the day when I was alone, it had always been at sunset that I felt this lonely. I never really paid attention to this feeling very much, normally I would just shake it off then go on with what I was doing; but this feeling just wouldn’t leave. A vision flashed in my head; it looked unnatural, like a very skinny person in a white jumpsuit, and it just kept swaying back and forth, almost like it was waiting till the right moment to attack. Did this vision have anything to do with how lonely I felt? Or was my head just making things up?


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so you like? ill have the new one up either tommorow, or sunday,......

 

Wow!
That's really good!!
I like it!^^

 

wow ur a grate riter! love it.

 

yay! another person! thanks too, now i can post the new chapter ;P

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Chapter 5

Hayner looked up at the tower, seeing Ailbyxe staring off to the sun, “do you guys think she’s mad at me for some reason?†he asked. The others turned around and looked at Hayner, “why would she be?†Pence asked Hayner; “I don’t know, its just…… she wouldn’t answer me when I asked her when she was leaving,†Olette walked up to Hayner, “she’s had a lot on her mind lately, you cant blame her,†she said. Hayner nodded, “yeah, I guess you’re right.â€

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It had already gotten dark, and I saw all the lights of the houses and buildings go on one by one. I stood up and started to walk home, “did you feel that loneliness Ailbyxe?†said a man’s voice. I quickly turned around to find nothing there, “WH-who’s there?!†I said, frantically looking everywhere. “A friend… you seem well, for a Nobody.†I turned around again, “what do you mean a ‘Nobody’? Who are you?!†I shouted, looking from my left to my right. I heard the man laugh, “That’s right, you’re the famed nobody that never realized what she was. Tell me, have you felt that loneliness for a while now? Are you having dreams about other kids? People you have never met in your short life, and a girl that almost looks exactly like you?†I froze; a bead of sweat ran down my face, “h-how did you know about that? Did Hayner tell you? Or were you eavesdropping?†I said and heard the man laugh again, “no, it’s a fact of every Nobody to have all that happen.†I felt uneasy and started to run down the stairs of the clock tower, “aww, that’s not very polite to run away from someone you’re having a conversation with.†The man’s voice echoed in the tower, I tripped and fell down the stairs, hitting the wall at the end. I saw a pair of black boots walk up and felt a hand grab my arm before I blacked out.


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“Admit it!†Sora said, looking over the edge of an islet at a drenched Riku and me, “admit what?†both of us said in unison. Sora shook his head, “never mind,†he said, I looked behind me at the crystal clear ocean as I normally did and saw a glint in the water; while Riku was climbing the ladder to get back up, I walked out to the water till I was waist deep, Riku looked back at me, seeing what I was trying to get. Kairi and Sora looked at me then Riku. I looked closer to see it was a bottle. I grabbed it as the waves carried it closer. I looked in the bottle, seeing a rolled up piece of paper with a symbol that consisted of three circles. I walked to the shore, water dripping from my wet clothes. Riku jumped off the ladder and walked over to me. Sora and Kairi jumped down and walked over. I showed them the bottle, the seal facing up, “this is for you guys, right?†I asked. Sora took the bottle from my hand, opening it and sliding the letter out. I walked away to the dock, not wanting to intrude on something that isn’t my business. Riku watched me leave and looked at Sora, “what dose it say?†he asked
‘Sora, Kairi, and Riku,

Hey Fellas, word has come to me that the Heartless have gone up in number again, the Nobodys too. Something’s not quite right though, the plain shadows are stronger then normal, and every Nobody has gotten stronger too. I fear it is a repeat of history, listen, I can explain later, but I need you to come to Disney Castle. But before you do that, there is someone with much power that I need you to find. She has lost all memory of having anything to do with Kingdom Hearts, so she might try to refuse to come. Do what ever you have to do get her here. If my predictions are right, she should be either at your islands or at a nearby world. Bring anyone you might feel would be her, See ya soon fellas,'



“So the heartless are acting up again?†Sora said in a disappointed voice. Riku sighed, “I don’t think they’ll ever go away… but, the king said that there’s someone that can help,… And it’s a girl,†he said, Kairi looked over at me, I was leaning back on the dock with my feet in the water, I felt kind of left out because they never told me what that symbol meant or who it was from.

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im not so sure about this chapter, i was just getting stuff down that was in my mind at the time >> <<

 

Really interseting[sp]. Please contuine, I wanna know what happens!!!

 

awesome! XDXD great job! :p

 

aww, thanks,... and its cool cause i acctually got this one done pretty fast :D

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Chapter 6

I woke from the dream, grabbing my head from the pain, “can’t I have a normal dream just once?†I said and slowly got out of bed, wincing from the pain in my back. “Today’s going to be a long day,…†I said and walked to the bathroom to brush my hair; I had already had my clothes on, and didn’t want to bother messing with them. When I looked in the mirror, I noticed a giant bruise on my arm, so that’s why it hurt if I moved it the slightest bit? I thought that I might have broken it when I had hit the wall. And my back was still sore. I saw a scab on my head where I had hit the wall, who was that man? It was his fault that I was so banged up.

I began to think, which I wish I hadn’t after a point in time, everything had changed when I started having those dreams, I growled to myself, “I wish I never had those dreams; I wish things would just be the same,… I wish I had nothing to do with that stupid girl! I hate her so much!†I blurted out, the next thing I knew the same mans voice rang throughout the small ‘apartment’ I had, “is that so Ailbyxe? Why don’t you tell her yourself?†the man said. This time when I turned around, I actually saw who it was speaking, the man had on a black coat and the same black boots I had seen the previous night, his hair was flaming red, he had a sort of long face and sort of diamond like tattoos under his eyes. “Who are you? And why do you keep on following me?†I asked, not really caring about the pain any more. “I’m friends with the boys from your dream.†I frowned, “I meant your name,†he laughed at me and smiled, “the names Axel, A-X-E-L. Got it memorized?†he asked, I stared at him, “ok, Axel how do you know what boys I’m dreaming about?†Axel slyly looked at me and grabbed my arm, dragging me outside; when we got outside I could see Hayner and the others looking up at my window. Apparently Axel had seen them too because he hurriedly dragged me to the mansion I had seen when I first arrived. “You’ve seen this place, right?†Axel asked, I looked at the white curtains in the upper left window, “yeah, I walked around in it when I first came.â€

“This is where it all began for you.†Axel said. I looked up at him, “what do you mean?†he let go of my shoulders, he looked at me like a big brother would, “do you remember anything from before you set eyes on this mansion?†he asked, it sounded like there was sympathy in his voice. I looked up at the mansion, “well… I.....†I started thinking; I wished I could have told him about a lot of things from before I came here but,... I couldn’t. I couldn't tell him about being a kid, or crying in a room because I had to leave other friends,.... I couldn't even tell him about my parents,... Because none of that happened, I don't have any parents, nor do I even remember having them, I don't remember having any friends or being in another house before I came here,.... I felt scared for a moment.

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so how was that? theres alot more to come so be ready!

 

like ZOMG!!! AXLE!!!! I wanna read more!!! Please!!! T.T

 

That was good^^
*Wants to read more*

 

Axel!!! I Wanna Read More!!! Xd Xd Xd