Digital Art Starting to get a grip...

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Jⱥy, May 7, 2011.

  1. Jⱥy King's Apprentice

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    Im practicing and practicing and im getting some results.

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    So guys tell me what you think. Some pointers would be nice :3
     
  2. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    I like this. And for a beginner, this is quite nice, and it looks quite clean. I like the text in the second one, and the colors in the first one. But it'd be nicer if you worked a bit more on the fractal/C4d used for the background, I can see you used a filter on it. Overall, quite nice and clean. I wonder what happened to the stock's legs...

    What font is that, btw?
     
  3. Ienzo ((̲̅ ̲̅(̲̅C̲̅r̲̅a̲̅y̲̅o̲̅l̲̲̅̅a̲̅( ̲̅̅((>

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    Yeah I really like these, the colours are great in both and the text is nicely done. The only thing I'd say about it is I'd try and blend the stock more into the background so it looks more part of the signature. I'm no expert but I do really like the effects and lines in the background. Keep it up.
     
  4. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    I like it. It looks clean and if you had done the color of the first with the text of the second I would've just died.

    Overall very nice, and I love how you used the sprite from your Trainer Card gif for it...
     
  5. Daxa~ #stalker

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    I like them.
    The first one has really nice colours,and its all blended well and looks great.
    And the second one looks really dramatic and stands out.
    Great work :3
     
  6. Jⱥy King's Apprentice

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    I took your advice on blending the Sprite more into the background -

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    Gimme your thoughts guys...


    and the black and white version -
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  7. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    This one is even better! The added colors in the background are nice and some of the smaller changes are beautiful.

    Well done my friend. Well done indeed...
     
  8. Ienzo ((̲̅ ̲̅(̲̅C̲̅r̲̅a̲̅y̲̅o̲̅l̲̲̅̅a̲̅( ̲̅̅((>

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    These are both so much better and they are really good. I think I prefer the first one because I just prefer the colours. I do like the black and white one as it makes the render stand out more but the first one is my favourite.