Star Gazer

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  1. ansemsnobody Destiny Islands Resident

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    hi well this is my new fan fic... well my first one acctually


    Star Gazer


    “I can’t believe you’re leaving.” said my best friend Kira. I didn’t want to leave but “my parents said that I should get a good education.” I said staring up at the stars.

    “Star”
    “what?”
    “Do you like it. It’s going to be my new name. I’m going to need a new image for a new place.”
    “But I like-”


    “Are you alive?” said an unfamiliar voice. Of course I was alive! I open my eyes to boy with unbelievably spiky hair and warming eyes. “Where am I?” I say getting up and looking around, and for some reason it looks familiar. “Well ummm I’m Sora and this is Donald and Goofy.” the boy- I mean Sora says gesturing to an unusually large duck and a goofy looking dog-I get it! “Did I ask for your names?” I say in a rude voice just to mess with them.

    “I’m kidding! My name is Star.”
    “Oh why Hello Star! Where are you from?” says Sora
    “I’m not so sure.” I reply. For some strange reason I can’t remember a thing ,beside my name.
    “where’d you find me?”
    “There” Sora says pointing to the floor in front of what looks like a star shaped portal.
    “Oh….. So where is this place?” I ask
    “Traverse Town” he answers. He looks so happy on the outside but you could tell he missed someone.

    “We were just on our way when…” Sora says, but I’m not paying attention I’m trying to figure out why this place is so familiar. But I can’t think of a thing, not a thing. Tears start rolling down my eyes. I don’t want Sora to see them so I quickly turn away. “…and that’s why we’re here…Are you Ok?” says Sora finishing his story. “I’m fine, I just… I can’t remember anything, It feels horrible” I start bursting out tears when- “Heartless!” yells the large duck. “what?!?” I yell. “Come with me!” screams Sora. I follow along. I’ve never seen creatures like this well at least I don’t think so. We enter a hotel and hide in a room that’s all green. “I think we’re safe” Sora says.

    I feel exhausted and fall asleep on the bed there.




    “You’ll have a great education. Ansem the wise is the best teacher around.” I hold on to my mothers hand tight. I hate going to new places they always scare me. I see a sign that says “Welcome to the radiant Garden” well I don’t feel very welcomed. As soon as we enter the huge castle I can feel something dark. Then we are approached by a man in a lab coat and long silver hair. “Ansem will meet with you soon just wait right here.” the man says, his name tag says Xehanort. I scan the room. It’s a very nice office, but its clattered with papers and books. “hello It’s very nice to meet you-” I cut the man off “Star, my name is Star” my mother gives me a peculiar look “well hello Star, My name is Ansem.” he says “I hope you will have a great experience here.”



    feel free to reply oh and this is ch 1 I'll come out with Ch2 later when i'm not lazy
     
  2. valorwithinchaos Merlin's Housekeeper

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    awesome! :DI really liked it and its so good for a first fanfic! :D
     
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