Traditional Art Spyro and Amaterasu

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Absol, May 25, 2008.

  1. Absol Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Yeah...the reason they're photos is because I don't have a scanner x_x

    I know the legs on spyro suck...
     
  2. pirateking_luffy Banned

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    those are pretty good drawings absol,and jsut keep drawing,you'll get better on the legs,plus your a whole lot better then me.
     
  3. amythest Traverse Town Homebody

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    theyre really good! i like the amaterasu a lot! ^^
     
  4. Princess Luna Supreme Co-Ruler of Equestria

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    Honest criticism!! :<
    I'm thinking that I'll become the harsh/mean/b!tchy critique for you aspiring artists! :<
    You're all welcome to hate me.



    SPYRO~
    On the whole, He looks looks awesome. The picture is well drawn and it looks nice. However, His chest looks a liitle too broad, almost making is seem like he's pregnant at the chest. And then his ass looks way too small. O.o' You're right about the legs, and feet though. Looks to me like you kind of gave up as you got to there. Expression wise, you did well, I love the expression. Still, the more I look at him, I keep getting a "old-dude" vive from him. Yeah, he looks a little old to me, or maybe it's just me. <_<
    Coloring . . . is this how you color everythign with the color pencils? There's nothing wrong with it, if this is your style, but if it's not, the I suggest that you should try and smooth out your colorings. The smoother the coloring, the better it'll look. Blend in the colors, the contrats and the shadows. It'll look sexy.


    AMATERASU~
    This one is SO MUCH better than Spyro. His anatomy makes it seem like he really is in motion. Is this water color? Good job on coloring the pic, hun. He looks awesome, and I don't have anything to say about him except for that paw in the back, on his back leg. It could've been better.
    I'm not that fond of the background though. All the while he looks sexy in the picture, the background looks too 2D. <_< Especially the lily pads.