The second line of text is a bit hard to read and the bright spot on the top is a bit distracting. Otherwise it's very nice^^
The top left is very empty, and the text is hard to read. Other than that this is another great piece.
I could read the text just fine. :/ Also, it's just fine the way it is, if he added more stuff to the 'negative space' then it would look all cluttered and messy. Anyways, it's hawt. :U