Digital Art Spidey -WEEE!-

TBK gave me some tips on this one.



CnC please?

-edit- Something went wrong with the left of the sig, so just to let you know.

 

Left side just kills the tag imo.right side.lots of flow but it isnt in the direction of the render.so thta messes the flow up lol.the red is good matching.its good

 

lol, I see you need to work on adding neg space, still.
Take out the render suplication and the neg space, and let's see how that works out.

 

It's funny how it was your idea for the negative space. xD
Anyways, this is what it looked like before.

 

Imo, it's too bright, that just takes away from the focus of the sig.

 

I look at it and it sorta feels off balance and erratic, but I see where you're going (at least fix the left side).

 

I understand what you mean. I was having trouble with the left side for a LONG while. Tried many things, but none of them worked out that well.

 

Hmm....
Maybe crop the left side a little more.

 

It's a very nice siggy.

I'd say for the left side, keep the one with neg. space and add just a few effect so that it has a nice simple feel to it.

The left side on the one without the neg. space kinda kills the flow.