Digital Art Spidey Sting

I decided to try a tut and make a sig, I didn't really like the tut and just decided against it and went and did different things.......CnC please?

 

the c4d doesnt flow that well with the render,i myself have this c4d and hardly use it.text could have been better.and you have too much lighting,also try to blend in the render with everything else so it looks better.

 

Way to much light, I think the lighting effect should be toned down a lot. And the C4D doesn't flow very well. Also if you use that much lighting, put a gradient map over it, I would say like the purple orange one, and set it to screen.