Looks pretty cool, I love the colors. Effects look too reduced to the center and right around the render, possibly would look better if expanding a bit more. Text looks nicely worked but doesn't work too well, especially with the flow. 8.5/10 I've seen better from you.
VERY good improvement, TBK. ;) My only concern is the bluriness and text. What you could do is bring out your stock and put it on top, put it on multiply, then sharpen an applied image--but then erase the outer area's so it has some depth. The text is very plain and not that good. Lol. Try different fonts.
Nice one, TBK. Like Darky said, the stock/render is kind of blurry. Other than that, I think it's fine.
