Experimenting with this, rather simple but eh. Got inspiration from listening to a song about 20 times on a loop. xD v.1: v.2: CnC I guess?
The C4D you used for this is very appropriate; I like. V2 looks nicer with the small text beneath, but they're both pretty much equally nice in my opinion. Some of the smaller text is a tad hard to read, but not too difficult. Nice work overall. I love stuff like this.
Finally something I've got enough experience in to give cnc for :D First of all, I'm digging v2 simply because of the way you positioned the two 'S's and the subtitle underneath. My gripes with this is that the subtitle doesn't really blend in with the top text. I'd say move the subtitle text up a little so it looks like it's connected to the top text. Also fix the spacing between the letter A and P. It's just too far apart and brings my focus there instead of to the whole thing itself. I'm gonna also add in that you play around with the C4D within the text. It looks like you just made a clipping mask and moved the C4D around until you found a spot you liked. I'd say add some small photofilters, gradients with certain settings, and possibly mix in some other C4D's on a lower opacity with a different setting besides Normal.
