WARNING: This is a fanfiction depicting yaoi. Note: This fanfiction takes place 4-5 years after the anime ended, making all characters 18-19 years old. ~~~ Chapter 1- Hidden Love Spoiler I stared at him from afar. His bright blue hair shined in the dim sunlight that managed to pierce the dull window’s glass pane. His muscles seemed to pop out of his shirt, like they were trying to escape the tight clothing and be free. As he turned around to talk with another student, our eyes met. I blushed ever so slightly as our eyes made contact. His green eyes simply passed over mine, but it seemed like we were looking at each other for hours on end. With just one glance, I felt closer with him than anyone else. As I walked out of class, I felt a rush of wind pass by me. I glanced ahead to see Black Star blaze past me. He peered back, more eye contact, but this time with a timid smile. I felt my heart drop as I practically fell to the ground. I heard footsteps as someone appeared beside me. I looked up to see Maka standing over me, her hand outstretched. I grabbed it as I pulled myself up. “Thanks,” I said slowly, still paralyzed from the thought of him. “No problem,” she replied. “Are you okay?” I nodded my head rapidly as I bent down and gathered my fallen books. Maka smiled at me as she turned away. She soon became out of sight. After she left, I immediately ran down the hallway towards the direction of Black Star’s departure, feeling like I was being pulled towards him like a magnet. I kicked up some pebbles as I shuffled my feet down a small dusty trail leading to my abode. I sighed and looked up to the sun, its twisted, psychopathic smile high above me. As I entered my house and closed the door, I heard the doorbell ring. I turned around quickly, wondering who it was. I moved the curtains and looked out the window. I suddenly felt weak and nauseous. It was Black Star at my door, with a huge grin on his face. I cautiously open the door as he charged in. “Hi Kid,” he happily said. I gulped and managed to spit out, “H-hi, Black Star.” He laughed, his mouth opened wide. “W-what are you doing here?” I said sheepishly. “Why? You don’t want me here?” He grinned. I shook my head no quickly; I would do anything to have him stay. “I actually came here because you left your book in class today.” Black Star extended his arm. “Thank you.” I said, nearly bowing. I brushed my hand over his as he handed me the book. I felt my face turned rose-red as Black Star laughed again. “Something the matter?” he asked. Another grin appeared on his face. “N-no,” I nervously said, my face on fire. Black Star moved in closer, our bodies only inches apart. Our eyes made contact again as I looked up at him. “Hey Kid, there’s something I need to get off my chest.” Black Star said, inching closer and closer. “Y-yes Black Star?” I asked. Suddenly, I was pushed onto the couch. Black Star appeared on top of me, his infamous cocky grin forming once again. I was felt confused, yet ecstatic, as he leaned in close and said, “I like you.” My eyes widened and my bright red complexion returned to my cheeks as our lips finally met.
Finally got around to reading this, too. Anyway, this was really good ANDROO. I have not watched Soul Eater at all, so I don't know the narrator's name off the top of my head, but I liked the contrast between his and Black Star's personalities. I think maybe you could have made the narrator be a bit more dynamic, as he seemed kind of stuck in the pure innocent personality (unless this is how he is in Soul Eater xD) Other than that, no grammar/spelling errors as far as I can see, and overall great job. c: this is why it pays to watch animu kids ;~;
