Sorry

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  1. Mexony Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Came from the inside of me, how sorry I am with my family. From what've I done and said.Trying to prove my point for them.


    Sorry


    Everday we fight and cry.
    We say stuff that were never met to come out.
    It hurts others but...
    We love eachother, right?

    I'm sorry for declining your questions.
    For the stubborn words I said.
    I never ment it, I'm just trying to stand.
    Stand for myself.
    For protection.

    I don't care if you don't accept.
    I care for the fact...
    Your actually listening.

    Although I may shelter my feelings and bad mouth you all.
    But I'm not sure if you realized.
    Do you know what you have said to me.
    That hurts me?

    You can call me names
    Any name will hurt but I have my shield.
    A shield to block the attacks.

    I may ignore your comments and things.
    You may think I don't care what you tell me.
    But there's a reason to that.

    So if you think I'm too damn stupid.
    Might as well kick me out the house.
    Give me my things and a small lunch.
    For there, I have one saying.

    Sorry.


     
  2. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Wow. That has alot of meaning around it. Nice work.
     
  3. Roxaspartanti King's Apprentice

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    Thats how I feel...except My sheild is battered at school and its dead...
     
  4. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    wow, this isnt the best piece of work.

    and yet i feel something from it, strong feelings.

    and you managed to convey the feelings through this poem.
     
  5. Wulphie! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    I'm having, like, this majour fight with my best friend and that explains exactly how I feel and how I think she feels.
    I could not have worded that better myself.
    Partially because I suck at poetry.
    But nonetheless 5 stars!
     
  6. Fellangel Bichael May

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    Very touching. Everyone has a problem like this.