People really have to post REAL cncs. Well, it looks similar to a version I made recently. It needs some work though. The light source could be better. The top middle is the light right? Instead of brushing, try smudging some spots that are a bit less important. Take the solid red brush away though. And add a gradient. Put it on...color or um..what was the other one...the one that makes most of the focal part of the image in a different color. It's near the bottom, somewhere near Color and value, if you know what I mean. On the layer dialougue, the settings of the layer.
