Digital Art sora sig

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by tofuman, Aug 4, 2008.

  1. tofuman Twilight Town Denizen

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    please cnc, i tryed my best and did a little experimenting and hopefully you like it.
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  2. blacknumbers Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Its pretty good, but the background doesn't match the render.plus that bulb of lighting is to thick.
     
  3. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    Set the big blue ripple thing behind sora to screen or lighten or something. If it doesnt look good change it back I have a feeling it will help. Also, the random white lines mess with the flow.
     
  4. tofuman Twilight Town Denizen

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    i know D: that is y i tryed to put some white in
     
  5. Anderson (☞゚∀゚)☞ You've lost the game.

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    Not every experimentation works out well, but the effort is what counts and that's how you learn.

    The bluish lines/brushes/whatever they are kind of throw off the sig. Try to make them go in one general direction for flow. The background colors don't blend well with the render so it looks like it's a clutter of random effects. The lighting has a good idea, but since you didn't darken any other part of the sig for realistic lighting, it looks like some random spot of light. You also lack FG effects and that makes the sig all the more monotonous.
     
  6. tofuman Twilight Town Denizen

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    i lighten the bulb a lot more

    edited: the white lines are lazers
     
  7. Advent 【DRAGON BALLSY】

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    Awesome tofuman! I like the background!
     
  8. Fallen King Kingdom Keeper

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    the background is bugging me, you might wanna add a C4d to the background, and blend the render in more
     
  9. RoxaSora2010 Nulla è reale. Tutto è lecito.

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    For me it's amazing man:D:D:D I like very much Final Sora and the colors:p
     
  10. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    Only complaints are the color and the random white lines going everywhere--get rid of them. >:

    The color could use some work. Add some gradient maps on a layer mode to alter the color. That way the light doesn't look so... white.