it was 5:00 p.m and sora was sitting on the dock at destiny island next to kairi "sora's grown apart from us goofy" donald sadly said "not a chance" said goofy "as long as we're here he won't forget us" said goofy "I sure hope you're right goofy" said donald as he sighed "hey fellas what are you guys up too" said king mickey "oh I see sora has a special person" said king mickey as donald sighed <MEANWHILE> "sora?" asked kairi "what?" sora replied.kairi looked away "oh nothing" kairi said as she blushed. "oh is that so?" sora said as he put his arm behind kairi. "sora? what are the other worlds like?" kairi asked. "just like our world" sora replied "oh" said kairi then kairi started to stare at sora and sora stared at kairi <MEANWHILE> "oh here comes riku" said king mickey " hey you know sora and kairi ar togeth... oh I see you found out" said riku "oh look" said goofy pointing at kairi and sora as kairi and sora leaned towards each other and then went back again "sora I think I..." kairi was interrupted because sora kissed her."what?" said sora. kairi smiled and said "oh forget it" and she layed her head on sora's shoulder
It's a bit short, but it got substance. Maybe you should put in paragraphs. Can you check out my fanfic?
