Way to much light. My eyes burn. And the BG and the render don't match at all. Try applying the image and changing the blending mode. Also if you use that much light put on a few gradient maps and photofilters to tone it down.
Like the others said, the lighting is a little too bright, so just darken that a bit. The render seems a bit choppy as you can see the outline is very noticable. The sig could use a few more effects, but it's not bad. Btw, are you Dark Roxas? I haven't been around for a long time, so I don't really know what's going on anymore.
ok.the first one the lighting is ok but a bit too much contrast. second one.gradient maps arent used like that.you have to set them to a blending mode or change the opacity to something that looks good.otherwise gj.
No the gradient map you need to layer it, I suggest take the orignal and put a purple/orange map, then set it to screen and lower the opacity, then but a black/white map on and set to lighten and lower the opacity.