Something i wrote down this...

I never wrote something down....but i tried to do one.

*ahem*


"Life isn't easy , you choose the path to find...either good or evil. No matter what , but still.....Life isn't easy."


So whaddya guys think? i suck at this "writing" thing...but i tried. :T

 

Pretty good for a starter. X3 " Life is not just, it's unfair. I don't understand why we have to choose our own paths, separated from others. A life like mine is full of pain.... why should life be so unjust?" .........I have no idea x.x...... I liked your point of view of life :3

 

Yeah , i was about to leave kh-vids .....because things didn't go well in my life.



Ya' know what i mean?

 

Yeah, life doesn't go well for me as well.

 

Beautiful saying there.

My life is quite tough as well. Keep your head up.

 

This is a pretty good start. If you were going to make this into a poem, though, I'd suggest inserting some line breaks and such. Kinda like:

And then maybe flesh it out a bit. It's pretty simple at the core. But the concept is good. :)

 

It's pretty good for a starter.But like DF said,if you were wanting to make it into a poem,you should have separated it.Over all it was very good.​