All you really did was make the pic all one color with some text =/ This needs a lot of work if you are wishing to improve it. Also, ditch the effects you have on the Rainbow~Monkey text.
too much text. the text shouldn't be my focal here, since you have a stock and all.... I'm also not digging the monotone color choice. She appears sad, therefore blue would be a much more suiting color choice. Also, the glittery text doesn't fit in too well, and saving your tags as .gif's ruins the quality signifigantly. good try, though. I guess.
way too bland and too much text. like Cody and Knuckles said, the glittery text just doesnt seem to work. try adding some others colours and effects because i'm not digging the result you have at the moment.
I think its too dark. the text is nice, but it takes up most of the pic. keep trying! ill be rooting for you! (kudos for being able to make one period. i cant even figure it out. :/)
You did nothing but slapping on some text. You need effects, a real render, and not a million lines of text. The sparkling name is very distracting, too. Also, the dimensions are waaaay too bulky, and would look a wee bit obnoxious. 1/10. Try using GIMP, it's a good replacement if you don't have PS.
sorry to say but it only looks like you changed the colour and thats it. definitely download the recent version of GIMP and read some tutorials on deviant art.