These are some short poems I wrote. They just popped into my head (not all at once) so I wrote them down. Then I decided to post them here. Kind of simple story, isn't it? Anyways, I just want to see what people think, that's all. 1st Random Poem: Up or Down? Old Mrs. Brown, Lives upside-down, And the ground is right beneath her. Her prize-winning pup, Is right side up, So now she is not so sure. 2nd Random Poem: The New Drummer There once was a guy named Jim, He really liked to play rhythm. Then one day, He forgot how to play, And the new drummer is Tim. 3rd Random Poem: Joe? There once was a guy named Joe, And that is about all I know. I wish I knew more about him. I sit and wonder, Through sunshine and thunder, Until the lights grow dim. 4th Random Poem: The Rabbit He hops, hops, hops, down the road, Not scared, frightened, or cold. His floppy ears are white as snow, Rosy cheeks that seem to glow. His fluffy tail all white and round, Upon his face, no sadness found. A chilly wind blows across his face, Then he is gone without a trace. 5th Random Poem: Winter The snow is falling. Is the first day of winter, Everything is white. Okay, these are all I could find. I have many others, but some are really terrible, while some good ones are lost. Oops. I will look for more poems and post them here, or even write some more, but I am not sure when I will have those up. Oh well. Your Opinion, please! ^^
I noticed you like rhyme poems. There pretty good, but poetry contains imagery and expresses emotion. I know I'm sounding like Supernerd right now, but not much of these express emotion. Great imagery though.
Ya, I know, I just wrote them, not really thinking. I am not a surious poem-writer, so you can tell there isn't any 'feeling' in them. I just did it for fun! ^^ Thanks, though, for your comments.
