Traditional Art Some of my drawings Pokémon as well as a Fakemon (critic please)

Just some of my drawings I did I would like some critic please. There are five drawings.

This is my Fakemon here are her details.

Name: Kujaku (Peacock) Bara (Rose)

Age: 19

History: Kujakubara was born in a forest. She hatched out of an egg that was colored green all the way around it. It also had the design of a red rose on the side of it. When she was born there were only three other Peacock pokemon like her these where her parents and grandmother. The father left saying to the mother after she was born “That’s not my baby.†Eighteen months later her mother despaired after some pokemon poachers from Team Rocket took her away. Kujakubara and her grandmother hid in a large bush behind a tree while her mother tried to fight the poachers off. She is now Eighteen years old and there is still know sing of her mother. She has still has never seen another pokemon besides her mother when she was little and her grandmother now. Her grandmother continues to take care of her.
Appearance: Brown eyes, A Rose Design on both wings (one rose on each wing), yellow beak, green body, Note: I will add more later on her appearance.

Type: Grass/Flying

Classification: Rose Peacock Pokémon

Gimp code coloration: ff00ea (For head feathers), fff17d (For beak), 4b2525 (For eye), 34db00 (For body)



This is my Lati character Kristen (Yeah she is based off of me)

 

I will be blunt here. I think it would've been better if you drew out the whole fakemon. It's ok.... I'm also a little confused about the fakemon, is it supposed to be an actual species? because the description fits more for an OC.

The latiases look ok too. I kinda do have the feeling that they were based off images you were looking at at the time. keep drawing, and you'll get better.

 

Not trying to backseat mod here, but this is not appropriate CnC. Appropriate CnC should say things like techniques and how to improve on the drawing; not boasting about how good you are. Also if you are going to use someones gif you should give credit to the creator (RvR).

About the drawings, it seems you do not follow the CnC I(and others) give you; which has been the same for the last few threads you have posted. It also seems to be you are just using a grid; meaning you are looking at an original picture of Latias and copying it down line to line; grid to grid. You should start free-handing and make your own techniques and such.
I think you should start drawing more things; getting a better grasp for proportions and broadening your horizons.

 

Well I like the colors, but I agree with reptar you need to practice drawing free hand instead of using grids.^ ^ which takes time and commitment.^ _ ^

 

I like the black Latias one the most - your use of colours are very good. The first one felt like it was done in paint, so did the second Latias one. Your hand drawings are very advanced - a hell of a lot better than mine.

Overall, it's good. Nice job, I freaking love Latias and Latios. =]

 

I just love to do drawing, I think that doing drawing is one of the best way to keep your mind fresh and relax, you have really done a fantastic job, really nice one, I really like all your drawing, really amazing.