Traditional Art some drawings i did...

i drew some pictures when i was bored, and i wondered what you think of them, CnC please!!

Cloud:

(cloud looks wierd in that pic >.<) that is my worst drawing i think, DIE!!:guns:

Sephy:


some kingfisher:

(lol it's feet went wrong)

 

The first drawing looks odd..
You should have drawed more hair,and the eyes are almost in his forehead.

 

yeah, *kills first pic* thank though.

 

The kingfisher looks awesome! =D Love the colors.
Cloud, dose look a bit odd..More hair, and lower his eyes and it'll look perfect! =D
Sephy looks great also. the only thing is, is that his mouth is open, and he looks like he's kissing air or something. =/
But there awesome TD! =D
Great Job!

 

Cloud's overall head needs imporvement. Find a picture of him and use it as referance to the get the proportions of his head and hair right.
With Sephiroth, the hair looks fine to me, but the side view of his head could be shortened a little so it doesnt give him the appearance of a really long face. Again, find a picture of a side view and use it to help correct.
The kingfisher looks good, but it could use some shading. The left side of its body can be darkened, then gradually getting lighter across the rest of the body, like a gradient. The feathers at the bottom could use a little more color, as could the beak. The background is good, I like the vine going around the bottom corner.
Good job, keep working on them!