Traditional Art Sneak Peak!

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Darkcloud, Nov 28, 2007.

  1. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    This is not finished yet, I still have to put in a background and color it, but:

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  2. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    As I said before, it's a nice start. Plz finish.
     
  3. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    Working on it. I'll have more time to finish it when Christmas break comes around. Right now I'm just looking for CnC for any last minute changes before I add the background.
     
  4. Scarred Nobody Where is the justice?

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    nice pic. can't wait to see it colored.

    lucky sora.
     
  5. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    I'd make their eyes a little more realistic. They sort of look shoved off into the corner. Other than that, awesome job!!! Can't wait for the colors. ^-^
     
  6. Misty gimme kiss

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    Their bodies are a little too straight, IMO. Their faces are a little... Expressionless, too.
     
  7. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    Are you suggesting they lean towards each other a little bit?

    Yeah, I don't know how to put any 'expression' into their faces...at least the kind we're looking for.
     
  8. Nailpolish <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    I love it. except the faces =/

    but seriously, the bodies and extras are amazing! can't wait to see it coloured!
     
  9. Darkcloud Word of advice: Let the wookie win. He's Chuck N

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    I appreciate everyone finding things that they think are off, but I would also like to request a little bit more detail on suggestions. I kind of see where you all are going, but at the same time, (to me) they are kind of vague. Thank you so far, but please give a bit more detail on your suggestions. I want to make this pic as perfect as I can.
     
  10. .Kairi. Kingdom Keeper

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    It looks goos so far. Maybe make Kairi's(?) head lean toward Sora's more. Her eyebrow looks kind of thick for a girls IMO, try making it thinner.