Hmm...I think the lighting is pretty good. It could be better, but what you've got here looks fine. Some burning on parts where the light isn't hitting could be good. But anyhow, one thing that really stood out to me is the text. The Jellyka one. It doesn't look good in there for some reason. I can see what you were going for, but the text doesn't seem to be working. Some depth work could be nice too. The girl looks like she's on ground, but the light seems to be hitting her from the side? is the light on the floor? That's what came to mind instantly. In which case, maybe the light should come from above, meaning a more frontal light. Overall, I like the light, and I really like what you've done with this.
I really like it. The color looks great, and I think you did a great job with putting the lighting where you did. What really distracts me is the wording though. I don't know if it's too big or if it's just a lot, but everywhere I look it just draws my eyes away from where I'm looking. I've seen this picture plenty of times when I've look for pictures for my RP characters, so I think you did a really great job working with it
You've got pretty good lighting, but since you have her lying on a ground, you might want the light to kinda look like it's coming from higher up, rather than above her head. But it looks really good where it's placed. To the left of the girl's head, they're might be too much constant in the coloring, because I know something in that general area is bothering me, I just can't put my finger on it... Maybe it just feels like that darker blue is just kinda in one place, but I'm not sure. The text is a really nice touch, but the way you have it, it's not really spectacular in any fashion; if you could make it pop more, that'd probably do the trick. I really like the concept and the color scheme of this, it's really very nice. (:
