only one me that's all i have never been loved rarly been hurt love is a feeling i've never felt wish she could feel how i feel but i'm okay just by myself single that's all i am. something i came up with after a girl turned me down.
This is a pretty good poem but you need to use capitcalization, punctuation, and you spelt "rarely" wrong. its a nice poem thouhg, and i understand where your coming from.
okay. i've been taught that you don't need puntuation or capitalazation in poems. you spelled though wrong too.
xD yeah i just realized i spelt it wrong. and yeah you so actually. Every line needs capitalization, and punctuation makes it easier to understand the speed and emotion of a poem.
But a tip, adding different stanzas (verses) can some times add a good effect. you should try it in the next poem you write, bu if its not your style, its your choice as to how you write.
yeah, yeah , yeah, i get it. my casual typing isnt anywhere as accurate as when im writing a poem. example my constant "ign instead of ing"
