Another exaple of one of my poems that uses little words, but still has emotion to it. Everything was easy. Laid Back. Relaxed. Simple. Things were the same. Never changed. Casual. Simple. It was all going well. Nearly perfect. Amazing. Simple. Things changed. Made Strange. Different. Still simple? Things got worse. Why now? Not now! Not simple. Things fell apart. Please.... No.... Complex. Everything went wrong. Not sure why... Not sure how... Ruined. Now caught in the middle. Unsure. Afraid. Infinite Possibility. This is another one of my improv poems.
Wow... that's very interesting.. I liked how you described what it's like when everything's good and then it just started getting worse and soon it was too horrible... It's nice ^^ (And I love how you use such short lines... XP) Keep it up! ^^
Thanks ^_^. Its an example of one of my poems that describes that even when things go wrong, there is still possiblity to create somethign good out of it.
