show me the light

I'm out here on my own
To face the day alone
I'm searching through the black
I want to turn my Back
Since I'm lost in the cold
And I want someone to hold
I felly your near
Even though your not here
Reaching for a star
Wondering where you are
I'm beyond the mountain top
Where my dreams will never stop
I need you to give me a sign
Since I'm running out of time
Show me the light when I feel the dark
A ray of sunshine or a rainbow's arc
Show me the light...

reread wow cheesy^.^

 

This sounds like a song lyric...or at least it would go well with some kind of song, lol. Anyways, great job.

 

Wow, this is good...very sweet. :) Although you accidentally misspelled 'feel' but anyhow...great job!! Like Mastersword said, it's just like a story! Awesome job!! :glomp:​

 

This is actually good, it's not cheesy.

Try to divide it up into verses or something next time though.

Great job, still!
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