Short story

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  1. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Well, we have to write short stories in my English 1 Honors class, and this was the only thing I could think of. Anyways, this is all I have written so far. The only title I can think of for it is "Nevaeh".


    Nevaeh​


    Happily ever after. Good triumphs over evil. Light over dark. None of that applies to me. Though my parents were both pure angels, they gave birth to me.

    The outcast.
    The mistake.
    The dark angel.

    Every angel lives in Heaven. Every angel except "poor little Nevaeh". No one talked to me or even acknowledged my presence in Heaven. You're not supposed to be around a dark angel. Apparently, we possess a power so evil and so great it could destroy Earth, Heaven, the entire universe. So, to make sure I didn't try to use this power like all the others and to stop the humiliation and embarrassment of having a dark angel, Serafine and Leo (I refuse to call them Mom and Dad) sent me to live on Earth...

    Forever.







    So yeah, it pretty much sucks.
     
  2. robert the yogurt Traverse Town Homebody

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    Sucks? No I think that is awesom I like it.
     
  3. Wulphie! Gummi Ship Junkie

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    No it doesn't!

    I really love it!
    Actually, it sounds sort of like my best friend's story.
    (We write stories and let each other read them)
    But seriously, it's good!
    Nevaeh is a really interesting name.
    How'd you come up with it?
     
  4. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    It's Heaven spelled backwards.

    That's what my cousin was gonna name her baby if it was a girl.
     
  5. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Simply put.....incredible. Anything having to do with heaven or angels is totally my thing!