Hello again!~ Last month's winner was Typhlosion and his story Time and Tides. The repetition of phrases and the way the story was segmented was simple but effective; however, the judges feel dialogue could have been used to break up the vast amount of rich but intense description. Special mention also goes to Snorlax who wrote an extremely simple story but one which was a pleasure to read. The quick reference to KHV brought a smile to my face. c: This month's theme is Murder. Deadline is the end of the first week of January, since I will not have internet access during the New Year. Good luck guys!
It was sunset on the sea as I was sailing on my ship, the magnificent Pearl. Her wooden mast so high and vast. It's a wonder I don't go faster. But as the moon shrouds the sun; the young stars come out to play. their joy shining down on the whispering sea. That's the pirate's life for me mate. A pirate isn't just some drunken rogue, but a sailor at heart and warrior at sea. but alas me mates we have a new course. The island of Isla De Muerta. My crew, scarred with hate and anger have been talking of mutiny against my rule over my ship. Everything is going according to plan of course. My beloved Tala Dolma has told me of my future and I will be recognized as a man of amazing feats and quick craftiness. I will be Jack Sparrow, prince of drunkards and master of the sea. "Jack, where we be goin, Jack" asked the shrouded Jacoby. "That is none of your business mate now get back to work or you'll be skinned and fed to the crew." I'll continue tomorrow
