Traditional Art She shines like a star~☆ Konata

I'm back with more "supercalifragilistic awesome" drawings.

Wow,I haven't drawed anything ever since Novemember so I got creative while watching Lucky Star today :D


I still think it needs alot of work,like for example her hands,I'm really getting worse with the hands but I decided not to hide her hands.
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So DO YOUR WORST SKANKS.

 

IT BURNS!!!!! THE GREAT BEAUTY OF IT ALL BURNS MY EYES!!!!!!!!!!!!

And yes... It is a compliment....

 

That's actually really good. The only problem I can think of is the right arm. The shoulder looks like it needs a bit of a lift.

9.5/10

 

Thanks for the compliment but it's not real CnC P:

Yeah,I guess I got a little carried away and focused more in the shading,as always xD
Thank ye thank ye.

 

The hands could be bigger, especially the one she's holding up. Her right shoulder should be moved up as well. Not bad otherwise.

 

*pops in*

Konata.... <3

Anywhoo, don't let yourself fall into the trap by building up the figure judging by how the clothes are. It will only distract you and possibly add errors in the propotions. (what I'm about to say is perfectly normal for artists to do) See beyond the outfit, see only the body itself when you are making it, then add clothes later. *yes, draw a simplified naked body, no "details" though unless they're intended* It should help you greatly. I saw that you had a tiny circle as part of your helping lines *thumbs up for using helping lines! :D* - I would suggest that you make the orbs you draw the size of the joint itself, in this case it should be as big as you are thinking of having the shoulder.

Other parts, there should be a knot for the ribbon of her school uniform - in the anime this is simplified because the details are meant to be slim. When you draw you should add more details than the anime has. Nice work on the shading for the eyes though, truely like Konata's personality.

 

Oh yes! I know what you mean,I've doe that with some drawings Ive worked on some days ago (it involves Roxas and Naminé together,I don't think I'll post it though...or will I?) but I quite need some working with my "naked body drawing proportions".

and those circles things,I always forget those ; 3;

I appreciate the lovely CnC <3

 

In m opinion you gave the pic a personal touch! it looks better than the original and looks more of the better anime style