Shattered Hearts: Xellruss's ultimate weapon

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  1. Number72TheMonkey Destiny Islands Resident

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    Shattered Hearts

    Chapter 1: Day 30: Introductions

    In the halls of castle that never was, a group of 21 powerful nobodies in organization XIII. One develops a relationship with the 14th member (Xion), has the sun at his command, his name is Xellruss the raging sun, the 15th member of the organization.

    Xellruss wakes up in his room, "where am i? who's there?" Xion came in with 2 cups of hot choclate. "Relax Xellruss, my name is Xion" Xellruss sits up and looks around. "what is this?" Xion explains clearly to Xellruss. "this is your room in the castle..." Xellruss stares at Xion. "what happened to me?" Xion explains. "Well..."

    Flashback!

    Xellruss summoned his two keyblades, darkjima weapon and rising sun.
    a white hooded figure with blonde long hair sticking out of the hood summoned her keyblades. Xellruss speaks in a worry. "who... who are you!?"
    the white hooded figure charges at Xellruss. "somewhere from the light..." Xellruss jumps back off. "Eon!? that can't be you?!" the white figure confused. "Eon? When was the time i forgot that name?" Xellruss charged and swung his two keyblades but missed. the hooded figure dodges at reveals herself. Very long blonde hair with a pony tail, A Pair of ruby red eyes shines. "my name is Sharax and i'm here to consume you!"

    End of flashback!

    Xellruss spoke in a worry. "I... I lost?" Xion sits next to Xellruss "You were nearly killed so i appeared before she finished you off." Xellruss stands up and a bit stable. "you wear the same exact coat as i do you're a nobody?" Xion stands up and finishes her hot choclate. "The rest of us in the castle are nobodies, want to go and see them?" Xellruss finishes his hot choclate. "hot choclate? how did you? " Xion spoke shortly "Xeca told me..." Xellruss spoke in shock "my big brother's here?!" Xion spoke in shock "Xeca didn't tell me that you are his little brother, but how old are you?" Xellruss exits his room with Xion. "14 going to be 15 in august 18th, Xeca's 17..."

    End of Chapter 1...

    Note: I decided to make good use of capital letters and paragraphs. also speech marks, colons, as more. I try my best to make Shattered Hearts a good story, not a dairy or a webblog page by the looks of it with too much trouble...

    Story: In case you dont understand. allow me to explain...
    Xellruss wakes up in the castle and doesn't remember much. Xion comes in with 2 cups of hot choclate (Xellruss's favorite) gives one to Xellruss. Before Xellruss joined the Organization. when he fought against Sharax. he lost and was saved by Xion before Sharax finished him off. Xellruss has been told that his big brother is in the Castle.

    By the way I have a big brother named Alastair but he prefers his nickname Ace. I figured a Nobody name for Ace (Xeca) but a Nobody name for Alastair was too hard for me to figure out so Xeca was the best solution...

    if there is anything wrong with this story PM me and I'll see what i can do about it...
     
  2. Number72TheMonkey Destiny Islands Resident

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    Chapter 2

    Chapter 2: Day 31: The rest of the castle.

    Xellruss and Xion walk into the kitchen, 5 male nobodies was in a room. "That's Marluxia," Xion pointed at the guy with the pink hair and a pink scythe. "That over there is Demyx, he's a lousy fighter, but does know how to use that Sitar" Xion pointed out the Blonde mulhawk guy with a blue sitar. "That there is Axel, he likes to burn stuff and sometimes he loves that Got it memorized? catchphrase of his." Xion pointed at the red headed nobody with a pair of chakran's. "That over there is Luxord, never play poker with him since he has the power of the card's" Pointed at the blonde short hair with some facail hair nobody fiddling with his card's. "and finally over there is Saix, he literally gets beserk, we dont call him the luna diviner for nothing" As Xion pointed out the 7th member, Saix notices. "Showing the 15th member around are we?" Saix speaking as if it's not a question. "Since Xellruss don't remember much, i'm jogging his memory" Xion told Saix that Xellruss was knocked out from his last fight. "I See... do whatever you can to help him remember..." Saix walks away leaving Xellruss and Xion. "what's with that guy?" Xion turns to Xellruss. "He's the second in command, i would hate it if he's in charge instead of Xemnas..." Xellruss notices about that name. "Xemnas? oh you mean the superior Mansex?" Xion slightly giggles with that anagram. as the others heard it, they walk towards Xellruss. "What did you say about Xemnas?" Marluxia questioning Xellruss. Indeed Xellruss had the balls to say Xemnas unfortunate anagram. "Mansex that's what i said" Demyx giggles slowly. Marluxia stares at Demyx. "What?" Demyx stopped laughing for a few minutes. "That anagram is quite funny, I doubt that Xellruss here has the balls to say it at his face..." A Female Organisation Member with Blonde hair with a pair of green eyes. "What's with all the commotion in here?" The Nobody walks towards the 6 Nobodies (yes i have counted) Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, Axel, Xellruss and Xion. "That's Larxene, she hasn't been called The savage nymph purely for nothing, she can be a terrorising ***** i tell ya..." Xion whispered to Xellruss ear, Larxene wonders "What did she say?" Xellruss attempts to cover Xion of innocence. "Just a small introduction..." Larxene summons her kunai. "Ms kunai is going to upset because you're lying to her Xellruss, but let's not change the subject, what's this all about?" Xellruss noticed a glint in Larxene's eye's. "I only used Xemnas anagram which is Mansex..." Larxene caused her Kunai to disappear, laughs evilly. "Mansex... that's a good one, plus i want to prove yourself to call Mansex at his face or do something else that Involves that anagram" Xellruss knows that Larxene is going to set him a small mission. "All right, I'll do it, but first who is the mischievous one in this Castle?" Xion tells Xellruss about that. "Well since there are 21 Members. My guess would be Zexion." A corridoor of darkness appeared and saw a dark blue haired person with one long part of hair covering his right eye and short on the back of his head. "Anyone called me?" Xellruss walked towards Zexion. "You're the Cloaked Schemer aren't you? Zexion stared at Xellruss. "And you must be the raging sun himself who doesn't remeber much..." Xellruss cutted to the chase. "Zexion i hear that you can transform into anyone right?" Zexion gave a small reply. "yes, why? you're planning a small scheme against Xemnas arent you?" Xellruss spoke "Yes, but can you transform me into Saix?" Zexion looked at Larxene, She nods. "All Right." Zexion Casts his Magic at Xellruss and He Transforms into Saix." Xeix (basically a name when Xellruss transformed into Saix) looks into a mirror. "holy ****..." Larxene goes toward Xeix. "It's Time Xellruss, but get used to be called Saix and whatever you do don't let saix see you..." Xeix stares at Larxene. "All right, let's go" Larxene and Zexion stares at each other.
    Larxene: Why us?
    Zexion: you're the one who told him to...
    Larxene: that was just a mission!
    Zexion: the reason why Xellruss want's us to come because he does not know where's the superiors office is!
    Larxene: Well good for you smart arse!
    Zexion: Let's just go with him...
    Xeix: Are you guys done bickering?
    Zexion & Larxene: COMING!
    Larxene and Zexion Leads Xeix into the office and No one appears to be inside. but a small letter adressed to Xellruss. "Look Xellruss someone left a letter for you..." Xellruss Transformed Back to Himself Orginally and picked up the letter it says.

    To Xellruss

    I know what you are about to do, i dont think anyone is a traitor prank noting me, but i may return to this whenever i finished shopping with me mum. (OMIGOD MANSEX HAS A MUM?!) anyway, I got a Small suprise from you, Please read the back...

    Xemnas (Zem-nas)

    Xellruss turns the paper around and Reads it out loud.

    This message will Self Destruct in one second.

    Xellruss Stared with Anger. "WHAT THE F---"
    KA-BOOM!!! A Large Explosion come out the Room. before Xellruss finishes the word. Larxene and Zexion look back into the room, noticing Xellruss knocked out or slipped into a coma due to the Explosion. "Oh my god..." Larxene and Zexion Pick Xellruss Up. "Let's Take Him to the Lab..." holding Xellruss arms. "No ****! Zexion, Let's just go!" Larxene holding Xellruss legs and Carrying him to the Lab...
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    I'm not taking any of this seriously...