Secrets that kill

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  1. JapAnimeFanatic Twilight Town Denizen

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    ~Secret~
    There's a secret that I
    need to know,
    of why someone hates me so.
    Black as Black
    Dust to Dust
    goes my sanity
    -it may combust-

    There's a secret that's destroyed me,
    torn me,
    consumed me,
    gone round with me.
    Ashes to Ashes
    Gone as Gone
    I never thought things to go wrong.

    There is a secret that's killed me,
    and now that one
    stands over my corpse,
    holding a rose
    red as rum.

    Silently tears roll down their face,
    (as they mouth the word 'love')
    They couldn't win the race
    to catch me...

    Now they have told
    (the reason they hate me)
    our friendship was pure as gold

    this is a poem that i wrote today, i was a little depressed because everything was going wrong, and the secret part was because one of my friends was mad at me and i didnt know why
     
  2. myoblivion King's Apprentice

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    Sometimes depression brings out beautifull writings :3
    Good work <3
     
  3. Heaven's Angel Kingdom Keeper

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    It was a little choppy in my opinion, but still a beautiful poem... nice job, Jap... *hugs* :)

    And if you need to talk, just let me know, 'kay? <:3