Secrets of Twilight Town

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  1. YAY!!! Continue!!!!!!

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  2. This was good, keep going

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  1. Xragen Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Secrets of Twilight Town ch. 1

    Well, I'm obviously new here and I'm hoping that posting this will get me a little bit more caught up and up to date with things...
    It's mostly based around Axel, Roxas, and Demyx... cuz' I luffles all of them!
    but I am going to try and throw in some of the other popular characters!

    -It was a perfectly normal day in The World That Never Was, Xemnas was still trying to assign someone to watch over Castle Oblivion, Luxord was gambling with Xaldin, and Vexen was experimenting in the kitchen. Everything was the same, except for the loud screaming coming fom outside Demyx's room....

    Demyx: Xigbar?! Why on earth would you do that??
    Xigbar: Oh come on Demmy, loosen up!
    Demyx: But i like my sitar the way it is! I don't need one of your stupid guns on it!
    Xigbar: Well, it's too late now! Geez, you should have told me...
    Demyx: (shakes fists) You never even asked me!!!!

    -Demyx storms of to Memory's Skyscraper, sulking and kicking a small rock.

    Demyx: (mutters) Why does Xigbar have to be such a jerk sometimes?

    -He kicks the rock forcefully into a cluster of trashcans

    ?????: (whimpering)
    Demyx: huh?

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    meanwhile....

    -Axel knocks vigorusly on Roxas's door

    Axel: Roxas? Are you in there?
    (no reply)
    Axel: (opens the door and sighs) where is he....

    -As Axel closes the door, Larxene walks past.

    Axel: Larxene! have you seen Roxas?
    Larxene: (turns around and smirks) It'll cost you.
    Axel: (soulders droop) what do you want?
    Larxene: A Date!
    Axel: excuse me?!
    Larxene: (giggles) you heard me, do we have a deal? (reaches for Axel's hair)
    Axel: (dodges Larxene's hand) you know what, maybe I'll just go ask Zexion instead...
    Larxene: fine, but he won't know anything!

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    Back to Demyx...

    -Demyx approches the trash cans cautsiosly, he lifts the lid off of one of them and something leaps out in front of him

    Demyx: Gahh!

    -There's a white puppy-like creature in front of him, looking at him with his head cocked

    Demyx: Oh...h-hey there little guy, how'd you get here?
    Puppy: Well, I actually don't know...
    Demyx: wait a second, you can talk?!
    Puppy: duh. What were you expecting?
    Demyx: er....
    Puppy: wonderful vocabulary you've got there.
    Demyx: (straightens up) As suprising as this may be to you I've never seen a talking dog.
    Puppy: My name's Voren, not dog, and....where are we?
    Demyx: Oh, sorry um, this is The World That Never Was, seems gloomy here, but wait'll you see where I live!
    Voren: And you are....
    Demyx: Oh! Demyx!
    Voren: So, you live here??
    Demyx: Well, up there. (he points to the Organization XIII base in the sky and Voren's eyes widen) Awww. don't be so worried, wait till you meet averyone!
    Voren: There's more??
    Demyx: 13 of us! C'mon i can't wait for you to meet Axel and Roxas!


    Kind of an abrupt ending, but I don't wanna continue if no one likes it :<
    Tell me what you think!
     
  2. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    Very cute!!! I love those three! Please continue!
     
  3. Azure Flame Banned

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    It's okay. A little short, but otherwise fairly good.
     
  4. Starboy Destiny Islands Resident

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    lol date. :)

    Great story! Keep writing! I'd like to read it all!
     
  5. Xragen Merlin's Housekeeper

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    Yay! people like it!
    like i said, I'm new here, And I honestly didn't expect one reply!
     
  6. Emo Pengwin Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Lol..Never though of Axel and Larxene on a date. Very cute!
    Short, but cute..=D
     
  7. Xragen Merlin's Housekeeper

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    XP Yeah i got that idea after watching the Castle oblivion floor 6 video,
    Larxene seemed like a major flirt!

    I will post the rest ASAP!