Part 5 & 6 together! Sorry if you didn't want to spend that time reading ( For the ones who care anyway ) but it would have felt weird to put these 2 chapters alone. Chapter I Chapter II Chapter III Chapter IV Anywho, enjoy. ----------------------- Chapter 5: A battle ahead. The 4 brave warriors were about to leave. Kuro, Aqua and Ven came down the stairs. But they weren’t wearing their normal clothe. They were wearing armors. “How do you like your armors?” Mickey asked. “A bit tight…Yet they’re pretty light.” Aqua said. “Who made them?” “Ahh, a wizard back at my kingdom.” He replied. “Let’s depart.” ------------- A while after leaving town, they started talking. “So what are you guys going to do after this?” Asked Ven “Well, I’m thinking of opening my own shop.” Aqua said with a grin on her face.” What about you Ven?” “Bah, not sure yet. I still have to finish my studies first. Then we’ll see…and you Kuro?” “I’m still leaving town you know. I…just can’t stay in our town anymore.” Kuro said. “Aww man…It’s your choice I guess. And we can’t change that. Just know that we’ll miss you.” Ven said “Yea, I know. What about you Mickey?” Kuro asked. “I guess I’m going to have to go back to my castle after this.” He responded. “Hey Kuro.” Aqua whispered “Hmmm?” “After this whole mess ends, there’s a beautiful restaurant I know. Do you want to go there? Just like the good old days.” She asked. “Do you really think now’s the best time?” “Well I was just wondering… “She said. Kuro laughed, and then said “Ok. We’ll go there after the battle.” “Promise?” “Promise!” ------- “So Aqua, do you have a family?” Mickey asked. Ven and Kuro looked at Mickey in a weird way. “Well actually…I don’t have a family. My mother died while giving birth to me, my father became ill a few years ago and died…And my siblings died in an accident…” Aqua got used to losing her loved ones, she was cursed that way. “How much longer till we get there?” She asked. “Won’t be long now.” Mickey said. “Well, what I want to know is…” Ven was interrupted. “Wait! Stop!” Kuro yelled. “Wha…? Ahhh!” Screamed Ven. He was on the edge of a crater balancing himself out. Ven would have fell down if Kuro didn’t catch him by the hand. “Whoa, thanks Kuro” Ven said. A huge crater stopped them from continuing their quest. They could see the other side, just no easy way to get there. It would take hours if they wanted to go around it. “Look! A bridge!” Aqua Shouted. A long wooden bridge linked this side to the other one. But the bridge looked a bit….unsafe. Wooden parts of the bridge can be seen falling into nothingness. The ropes looked like they could break in any second. “You’re kidding right?” Ven said while gasping. “Do we have a choice?” Kuro groaned. He sighed then said “Let’s get going”. “You know we can go around it right? Guys? Guys?!” Ven yelled. The bridge could collapse in any second, so they went one by one. Aqua was the first to pass through it. And the first to make it to the other side. “See! Not that hard!” Kuro was the second one, and he made it. Ven was the third one to try to make it. Aqua and Kuro could see Ven’s terrified face. Half way through it, a couple of steps from the bridge started falling into nothingness. Ven started talking to himself. “I swear if we make it through the day I’ll never make fun of people again.” “Who is he talking to?” Kuro asked while looking at Ven. “I have no idea…But you know, I missed doing these kind of things with you guys” Aqua replied. “Yea, me too” Kuro said with a smile on his face. Finally made it to the other side, Ven jumped on the ground and started kissing it. “Ok Mickey! It’s your turn!” After taking one step on the bridge it started collapsing. Mickey quickly jumped back. Ropes started breaking, and all the steps started falling. The bridge was finally destroyed. “You okay Mickey?!” Kuro yelled. There was silence for a few seconds. “Yea I’m fine! You go ahead without me! I’ll catch up” Mickey yelled. “But how will we know the location!?” Ven shouted. “Trust me! You’ll know!” --------- “Hey guys, have you ever thought what may happen if one of us didn’t make it…?” Aqua said while looking at her two friends. “We did that come from?” Kuro said in an annoyed tone. “Ah, I don’t know. Maybe this Xehanort is tougher then we think” She said in a perplexed voice. “Nah, we’ve faced many things in the past. We don’t have to worry about baldy.” Ven said. “Hah, good to know… Is something wrong Kuro?” She asked. “We’re here” Kuro said with a serious look on his face. --------------A few days later----------- “So the battle ended.” Ienzo said. “Yup, your plan failed again Even” Said Ale. “It’s too bad too; you spent years planting those dreams in his head. Planting darkness in his heart with that creature Xehanort put us in command of.” Even said” -------------------------------------------- Chapter 6: Treason and betrayel. This was definitely the place. Keyblades upon keyblades were stabbed on the ground. They all formed a huge “X”. And a sandstorm was forming. The 3 knights put on their helmets and went to wait for the heartless. In the middle of the “X” were 3 keyblades. All 3 took one. Upon the horizon, a shadowy figure came. It was Xehanort. He was even more terrifying in person. But he the 3 knights weren’t scared. They were prepared for this. All their life’s work and training would be tested in this battle. ------------------ Author interruption!! : Hey, first off I’m glad you’re still awake after all this! Second: You all know what’s gonna happen next. If I wanted to explain it, it would have taken like 5 pages from Word. So this is the secret ending from KH2: FM+ If you haven’t seen it yet, then what the **** are you waiting for?!?! If you have, I’m gonna continue it from the part where Xehanort summons Kingdom Hearts. K? Later! : --------------------- After being rudely interrupted by the author!*cough* Back to our story: Xehanort shot a weird firebolt into the clouds. Then the sky split apart, and the moon appeared. No, not the actual moon, but a heart-shaped moon, Kingdom hearts. With a just a simple grasp, Xehanort pulled down Kingdom Hearts. Aqua while holding Ven in her hands looked at Kingdom Hearts and for the first time in her life she felt fear. Kuro took off his helmet. Something was wrong with him, it’s like he couldn’t breathe anymore. His blue eyes started turning into a yellowish color. Is there a connection between him and Kingdom Hearts that made him turn into a heartless? Mickey had finally arrived. But too late it seems. Xehanort had already summoned kingdom hearts. And the 3 knights couldn’t even touch him much less stop him. The ice that Ven was trapped in melted. Though he went unconscious. Aqua put Ven in a safe place. She took off her armor; she then started climbing the huge mountain Xehanort had created. For one last try to stop him. Xehanort was looking at his Kingdom Hearts amazingly. He then sensed a presence behind him. “Why do you fight me?” Xehanort said in a sarcastic tone. ”You and I are the same” It was Kuro that was behind him. “Me and you have nothing in common!” He yelled. “Oh really? Wasn’t it you who killed your parents Kuro? All you had left from your family. Aren’t you possessed by darkness?” Xehanort asked in a rhetorical way. “Shut up!” He yelled again. Kuro jumped high in the sky, while the light Kingdom Hearts was emitting, and attempted to land a blow on Xehanort. Xehanort laughed at his attempt. His doppelganger came in front of him and blocked. But it was a futile attempt by him. The doppelganger’s weapon broke with Kuro’s blow. The knight landed on the ground and with another slash the doppelganger was defeated. Xehanort laughed even more and then said “You see? Your anger and darkness gave you power! While your comrades failed to kill the doppelganger, you killed him in 2 blows.” “Shut up!” Kuro yelled. He started attacking Xehanort but it was futile. Xehanort was too fast and dodged his attacks. He then summoned his weapon and blocked. Both their swords were on each other, both Kuro and Xehanort were pushing towards the other. Kuro kicked Xehanort with all his strength and sent him flying to the edge of the cliff. “This is where it ends Xehanort!” He said while pointing his keyblade at his chest. “A change of heart…Wait Kuro! Don’t do it!” It was Aqua’s soothing voice. She had finally reached the top. “Don’t go as low as him!” She said. “Ahhh, Aqua. Good to see you again” Xehanort said. “Wha….what do you mean…” “Oh, you mean you don’t remember me? “Just a way to burn my past sins”” He Quoted and laughed an evil laugh. “You…you’re the hooded man!” She yelled. “Think Kuro! How could she have known that much about the heartless?! How could she have known about me?! Why don’t you also check her back pocket if you don’t believe me!” Xehanort said. “What?” She asked. Kuro appeared behind Aqua and took the necklace that was in her back pocket. He remembered the insignia of the heartless, and it was the exact same insignia on the necklace. “What is this…?!” He asked as he pushed Aqua back. “Kuro?!” She shouted. “Are you heartless?! You’re working for him!” He shouted back. “Didn’t I tell you Kuro?” Xehanort said with a grin on his face. “You!” Kuro appeared in front of Xehanort with the same pose he had before, while also pointing his keyblade at him. ”This is your fault from the beginning” “Go ahead, kill me.” Kuro didn’t move a muscle. “You see, you don’t have the guts to kill me! You’re just a worthless excuse for a heartless” He got up. “Kingdom Hea….” He stopped. He looked at his chest as it started dissolving. A keyblade was plunged him. “Allow me then!” It was Mickey; he stabbed Xehanort in the chest. Xehanort fell to the ground, lifted up his arm and said “Kingdom…Hearts…” He then turned his attention to Mickey and Kuro and started laughing in madness as he also started dissolving. The cliffs created in the battle with Xehanort started collapsing, as to the pressure of Kingdom Hearts since no one can control it” “It’s over…” Kuro said. “Not quite” Said Mickey. He said while attacking Kuro. -------------------------- Egad! Mickey attacked Kuro?! Stay tuned for more boring stories!
CLIFFHANGER!!!! Like I said before, you do much better when writing mostly dialogue. You know your characters and act them out much smoother when you write mostly what they're saying. Great job! And Mickey is completely nuts, right?
