Part 7!And the last one too. Chapters 4,5 and 6 were a pain in the ....well you know. Chapters 3 and 7 were the ones that I liked writting. I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as i enjoyed writting it. --------------------------------- Chapter 7/ Final Chapter: A loving heart. Kuro dodged Mickey’s attack. “You would betray me too!?” Kuro said; he then started attacking Mickey. But both of them were fast so no one could land a blow on the other. “What are you doing Mickey?!” Aqua yelled. “Aqua, he’s a Heartless! Can’t you see it?! If we let him live he would destroy the worlds!” Mickey explained. ---------- Kuro’s heartless/human form proved too strong even for the king himself. “I don’t care! He’s still Kuro!You're so obsessed with eradicating the heartless that you forgot who you're killing!” She yelled. “But Aqua!” He yelled. For the second Mickey was defenseless Kuro punched him with all his might. He screamed as he fell down into nothingness, Aqua yelled; “No!!” “Now for you” Kuro said as he was looking at Aqua. She leaned over her keyblade, picked it up and pointed it at him. “Don’t…don’t make me fight you Kuro.” ---------------------- “Yea but those dreams were just a way to remind him, it’s not like we actually created them” Said Ale. “Damn that girl.” Ienzo said. “We would have finally finished our plan if it wasn’t for her” “And Xehanort sacrificed himself for nothing” Even said. ”Looks like were back to where we started” “It seems we underestimated Kuro’s heart.” Ale said. “Stop blabbing about stuff like that Ale!” Ienzo shouted. “No you stop, stop manipulating, and stop controlling. You had your chance Ienzo. I’m done with your plans.” “Ale!” He shouted. “See you next time, *doubt it*” Ale said as he waved. “Humph, don’t worry. We’ll see him again. May it be in this life or the next. People like him have their fate written in darkness.” -------------------- “Ahaha, after what you’ve seen you think you have a fighting chance?” He said sarcastically. They started turning in circles looking at each other, Aqua with her pose and Kuro walking normally as if he wasn’t the least bit threatened. Aqua attempted to do a jump attack but Kuro stopped it and sent Aqua on the ground by just touching her keyblade. She grabbed her keyblade with her two arms as she got up and then tried to stab him in the chest. Kuro let his keyblade go and grabbed the sharp end of Aqua’s keyblade. He started pushing the keyblade towards her trying to make her fall off the cliff. “Futile” He said. “Kuro! Why are you doing this!? Look it what you’ve become!” “I'm still the same old Kuro! It’s you who changed!” He yelled. “But…” “But what?!” “I love you…” Kuro looked at his reflection in her keyblade. His hair semi-flying about, and his devastating golden eyes. And then looked around him. His eyes turned back to normal and he stopped pushing. “What…Have I become? I’ve attacked my friends...and killed the king.” “You can still redeem yourself Kuro…” She said. “No…Not after what I’ve done…Not after what I’ve become…Mickey was right.” He took a step back then said; “Aqua…I want you to kill me.” He said in a low tone. “What?! I…I can’t…I won’t!” She yelled. He took off his left hand from the keyblade and started caressing her face. “You have to. I can't kill myself…” He said. “No…Please don’t do this to me!” “I’m sorry” He let go of the keyblade. And with that small moment Aqua forgot the last remnants of affection she had for him and plunged her keyblade into him. As he was falling Aqua grabbed him and put him slowly on the ground. “No!” “Hah, thank you…” He said as he coughed blood. “Why…Why did have to be you…” “Everything happens for a reason…”He said while he touched her cheeks.”Hey, remember our conversation earlier…When I promised you that we were going to go to a restaurant?” She slowly nodded. “Well…Looks like I’m going to have to break that promise now.” He chuckled while looking at his body slowly decaying. “Kuro…” “Will that…”He coughed a bit and continued. “Will that be ok?” “…” He gently grabbed her arm. “Even in this light you’re still a Star of the earth.” Those was his last words, his hand fell to the ground as he let go of her hand. And faded away. Those words echoed through her head as she had a glimpse of her past. ------------------ It was the first time they met, in a Jasmine field. Aqua was there strolling along, as she looked at the beautiful Jasmines and picked the beautilful flowers. But every time she would try pick one it would crumble in her hands. Jasmines are delicate flowers; it would take a 10year olds’ hand to be able to pick one without crumbling it. She tried again, it crumbled again. “Dammit!” “It won’t work if you pick it up like that” Said a man from behind her. It was Kuro. “Then how do I do it?” She asked. “Simple, just gently put your hand behind the Jasmine and pick it up slowly” He responded. As she tried to put her hand behind the Jasmine it instantly crumbled. “….Ok why don’t you show me how to do it” She said while putting her hands on her hips. He gently put his hands behind the flower and slowly picked it up. “You know, they say Jasmines are Stars of the heaven that decided to live on earth.” He said as he looked at the flower. He then leaned towards Aqua and offered the flower to her. “I’d say such a flower would only be happy if it was with another Star of the earth” Kuro said with a smile. Aqua instantly blushed to that. “So what’s your name?” He asked her. “Hah” She turned around trying to hide her red face “Aqua. You?” “Kuro” “Kuro? That’s a weird name…” She said. “Yea, cuz Aqua is a really common name in the world” Kuro said while laughing. Aqua turned around and crossed her arm. “Haha, you should see your face” He said in a flirty way. She blushed again. “C’mon, I’ll buy you lunch. I know this great place” She nodded. ------------------ How would you feel if you lost someone you loved? Aqua tuned to tears right away. “Live on Aqua…Live on” Words echoed through the sky. She dried her tears as she got up. Behind Aqua was Mickey, he was still alive. He must have grabbed on to something when he fell. They picked up Ven who was still unconscious and went far away from the cliffs that were still crumbling. From afar, looking at the cliffs collapsing and Kingdom Hearts disappearing between the cloud, Aqua knew that it was finally…The End. Epilogue: All worlds start with darkness they say, and all logically end with it. Many people ask what happened to the brave knights. Aqua never did open a shop like she wanted to. Instead she just moved to somewhere far away. To forget the memories she has in her town. She will get married though. And have Children. Ven never finished his studies. He moved to a distant island. It wasn’t abandoned, there were towns and villages. Him also will get married and have children. His son will inherit his power. He will be a keyblade master. Though I can’t seem to remember his name…I think his name meant “Sky”. Nevertheless, he will save the worlds from darkness. As for Kuro…well he faded as we saw before. But remember, there is always another side to a story. --------------- “Wake up young one, your story does not end here” We hear a knock on a door. A blond haired man answered it. “Yes? Oh dear, what happened to you?! What’s your name boy?” The blond haired man said. “…Xehanort”. The enigmatic man said before collapsing on the ground. ------------------------------------------------------ Comment and Review! And be truthful as always. Man...It's finally...over....NOT :D. As you can see from the "Ending" of the epilogue that I'm gonna continue the story, but with just another name. That's right! You won't get rid of me that easy. ::Evil laugh:: BWahahahahahahahaah *Cough Cough* *Dies*
Hey, sorry it took so long to get back to this. And that I'm not commenting on all three chapters. Life is C-R-A-Z-Y. Commit it to memory. o.O Whoa. I so did not just do that. mmkay, I thought you rushed the past three chapters. I didn't really know Kuro as well as I could have so I felt as if I was robbed out of what could have been a very touching ending. While I am happy you had Auqa/Kuro in there (fangirl squee) it also seemed a bit rushed. I would have liked a little more depth. While I can see why you did the "Refer to New Secert ending" there's a better way of doing that without disrupting the story, giving a lead in that we "recognize" as the opening of the New Secert ending and then starting a new chapter with the tail end of it would cut out alot of that problem. You have a great spring board for a story, now you need to learn how to fleash it out. Don't get me wrong my friend I loved this ending. It was abrupt yet moved with a fast pace that fit the overall feel of the story. I love love <3 the Epilogue. Does that mean there is another segment? ::looks hopeful:: Wait a minute... ::gets hit by a bolt of Lighting:: OH MY GOSH! I just realized. ::points finger at face:: it IS Xehanort!! HA. I was so totally right. ::feels pleased with herself:: Who'd the man- er, Woman?! Either way That was a really great twist. Hmm, I think you've learned alot from wirting this. I'm really looking forward to your next stories. PM me if I miss them mmkay? See you around! <3, ToK
Heh, so yea I did rush them a bit. You know those 3 chapters were only supposed to be 1 whole chapter. But it turned out so long I had to cut them. Hmmm, I guess the ending should have been in more capable hands right? Bah, I did my best. But atleast I'm getting better. And yea he is Xehanort. When you started guessing that It might have been him I knew that I had to crush that dream :p :D. Thanks for commenting.
Wait aren't you dead?!!? xD Anyways, the story does seem a bit rushed. It looks like you wanted to finish off the story.:p But I really love the ending. Touching. And epilogue...wow. I guess TheOtherKeyblade was right. Do not doubt her powers!xD Can't wait to see your next story.
Ok fine, I'll rush less next time :p And I do not doubt ToK's powers xD. By the way, I'm gonna use a different style of narrating next time. The main character is gonna be the narrator and I have a really good reason for that. Plus it helps with the desrcriptions.
Okay, I can definately tell that you're getting better at this but I agree with theotherkeyblade; they did seem a but rushed. Slow it down a bit and take the time to explain your characters and events. Then, you'll gain a serious amount of fans. Otherwise, amazing story. I look forward to your next ideas.
