Digital Art Searching for a Blue Bird

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Bareri-San, Apr 10, 2009.

  1. Bareri-San 私はポテトだ。

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    Dude, I can't believe I made this bloody thing. One of the best tags I've made in a good while I think. It took me an hour or two as well.

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    What do you guys think? Critique is welcome and if you are only going to comment, explain why you actually like it.

    Btw, the stock in the tag is of a famous J-Pop singer known as Ayumi Hamasaki.

    Original image: http://www.last.fm/music/浜崎あゆみ/+images/3681306
     
  2. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    ....... J-Pop singer you say called Ayumi? ....... ! OH! I know her! ^^ I saw her in one of the Korean gameshows a long time ago! XD

    I like the sig! ^^ The bright and dark colors mix with her clothing. ^^ *purrs* Good job!
     
  3. Rainbow~Monkey Gummi Ship Junkie

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    i like the first one better becuse the light is brighter and yeah.
     
  4. Kenni-Chan King's Apprentice

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    I like the first one better, it looks more like a higher quality image, like the second one is the original image and the first one is a higher quality one, with more brightness and colour. But don't get me wrong, I like the second one also, I think you did a really good job, well done =]
     
  5. Scott Pilgrim Banned

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    Well for starters, too much negative space. Mae a light source where she's staring. The colors look good, and this is a good start, but put a bit more wok into the empty space on the left.
     
  6. Bareri-San 私はポテトだ。

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  7. Fallen King Kingdom Keeper

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    stick with v1, the lighting makes it look good, but near her left shoulder,(right Shoulder from the screen point of view), tone down the contrast, & brighten up the paths, or pentooling, whatever its called in what you use, and on her face tone down the contrast a bit, but not too much, you are really good at this. Nice Tag.
     
  8. Bareri-San 私はポテトだ。

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  9. Hayabusa Venomous

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    Put the text from the first into the second.

    Looks great so far. No complaints.